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notes for Oathbringer, book three of Stormlight Archive

TWoK, WoR and Edgedancer - https://gist.github.com/learnbyexample/32e109e5cc5f72326ca01ce9bcd19fcd

prologue: to weep

  • over a year since Eshonai first found humans and the night of treaty
  • Eshonai took to Alethi naturally, any particular reason?.. her wanderings take to Gavilar, with 2 officers, 2 women, 1 old man
  • Parshendi consider themselves to be traitors, who'd abandoned their gods to be free
  • Gavilar needs their help, says he's discovered how to bring their gods back - with very special gemstone to hold a god
  • Eshonai is terrified, says they don't worship those gods, they've abandoned them
  • Gavilar is acting upon his visions - Unite them.. he thinks a threat will unite them (whom?), knows that parshmen were robbed of their ability to transform by capturing an ancient crucial spren.. new storm to reverse that and bring heralds out of hiding (who told him that)
  • Eshonai is stunned that the world was much more, they'd thought Kholinar was as far as lands could go
  • Gavilar shows the sphere, dark faintly violet..asks her to take it to the Five and explain what he'd said... is this the sphere that allowed Venli to bond with Ulim?
  • Klade had brought Szeth, a voice(unmade?) speaking to rhythms leading him.. Venli was with him..

broken and divided

  • great art for Urithiru
  • not even gonna read the epigraphs, need context before re-read :P
  • Dalinar is visiting the visions at will and experimenting, it takes whole of part-1 to get reveal that he could get stormfather to show it to others as well
  • stormfather is speaking to Dalinar.. he doesn't have to be with highstorm all the time? or he could speak with Dalinar no matter where the highstorm is?
  • golden light, bathing everything in its heat, dark figure in shardplate (that's why Ulim needed it?), nine shadows - each spreading in different direction, eyes glowing brilliant red (Axies shadow points towards sun, Jasnah's shadow was pointing to spheres in WoR prologue)
  • something terribly familiar in enemy champion's eyes - Dalinar had interacted before or just red eyes similar to stormform Parshendi?
  • Dalinar thinks he has to unite whole world against enemy.. scout comes to inform Sadeas has been found murdered

one problem solved

  • 4 highprinces had fought in shattered plains, 4 more have joined now.. what about the remaining two? and no parshmen here, so humans have to do all the work
  • strata mentioned regularly, probably conductor for stormlight as others have theorized
  • May Aladar mentioned - short, pretty woman in 20s with tan eyes and round face
  • The Lopen has two arms, Kal's men had begun manifesting Windrunner powers (what about others who'd lost limbs?)
  • don't have abilities now that Kal has flown off, so how did The Lopen use stormlight when he was with Elhokar in Sebarial's camp?
  • Thanadal and Vamah are the ones who stayed behind
  • Aladar named Highprince of Information, Sebarial as Highprince of Commerce, Adolin to train armies, Dalinar has authority as Highprince of War.. bridge four to continue explore Urithiru with scouts/scribes
  • will Szeth's book have more info on Shin invasions?
  • KRs are tasked to practice, Renarin is given motivating speech by Dalinar

Momentum

  • first flashback, Dalinar doesn't have any shards yet
  • there are long days between storms during certain period of year
  • nose crunched..thrill comes..Dalinar recruits the archer who put two arrows into him

Oaths

  • Everstorm strikes Urithiru (low enough in sky to not reach Urithiru), Navani's memoirs mentioned - parts of which we got as epigraphs in WoR
  • stormfather says everstorm is new, didn't come in earlier desolations (is this true? or the nature of the storm is different?)
  • enemy aware of Dalinar, and he seems to get glimpses of the destruction caused by everstorm.. less powerful than the one they experienced in shattered plains
  • Dalinar finally tells someone (Navani) that he can't remember anything at all of Evi... he remembers some details, like Evi taken hostage by a city in rebellion against Gavilar.. that he'd brought vengeance to them
  • bridge 13 guards Dalinar as bridge 4 has other responsibilities.. starspren mentioned again..
  • Elhokar mentioned as resting great deal lately (talking to spren?), he is okay with Dalinar-Navani marriage as it'll make his mom happy
  • stormfather shows up with style, strong breeze, face stretching to both horizons.. first in millennia to be bound(to Dalinar).. what oaths did Navani break before..
  • Kadash says Dalinar shouldn't remind him of past and a memory suddenly come to remind Dalinar of the day Kadash left to become ardent - the rift, Rathalas
  • Dalinar says he's felt something beyond, warmth and light.. Honor was never God.. Kadash tries to remind him he is not infallible

Hearthstone

  • fourth day since Kal left Urithiru..everstorm had stuck before he could reach Hearthstone.. he'd warned villages he'd passed through.. no working spanreeds, so he couldn't contact Hearthstone (but did he contact from Urithiru before leaving?)
  • Syl has safehand covered and asks his opinion on the dress, she'd spent hours thinking :P spots a lurg, imitates it and startles the creature :D
  • Kal looks at destruction and so mopey that gloomspren have come.. Syl mentions her aunts (other honorsprens) hunting these..the more Syl is with Kal, the more memories come.. Kal lets himself to be bullied inside the manor (he later lets himself caught by parshmen)

Four lifetimes

  • nobody recognizes Kal..poor guard, you don't know nothing about Kal :P
  • the moans lead Kal to Lirin working who recognizes his 'little boy' soon enough..yells for Hesina..who promptly drops a tray seeing Kal.. Kal breaks down about Tien while parents are tearfully happy to see Kal alive (he was reported dead)
  • their home still stands, first hint of his little bro - Kal's spot dedicated to something else
  • Kal thinks he's lived/died thrice during the time away from Hearthstone..soldier/slave/captain - now becoming KR
  • Hesina says Roshone's improved, and there's something else..but Lirin interrupts to ask her to write a letter reg. Kal's brands
  • Syl says they're like she remembers them, because everyone/everything is connected, the winds(kindred blood) knew Kal.. besides there was another voice, pure with song like tapped crystal, distant yet demanding (Tien?)
  • Adolin's fashion rubbing off on Kal :P and lands a solid punch, felling Roshone.. for 'friend' Moash

A Watcher at the Rim

  • read together, it is 3rd chapter in a row for Kal..
  • 'Do/Be better' becomes Kal's mantra for part-one..
  • Any other question? :P but he really did spoil the floor.. Lirin lowers his head here, it'll change later :P
  • Kal casually agrees to tell Elhokar about the damages in Hearthstone.. and handful of sphere ain't big deal to pay Roshone..
  • apart from herself being intelligent and articulate, Syl is elegant and graceful weapon :P she does seem to put plenty of thought into words, she should spend time with Shallan/Jasnah/Navani
  • some of old spren have four genders, because of Parshendi forms?
  • Kal impresses upon Roshone about dangers and orders him to prepare for dangers.. Laral replies they'll do it..
  • they have one spanreed to queen in Kholinar (not responding lately) and fortunately one to Tashikk (where Lift had visited in edgedancer)
  • Laral won't stand for insults of her husband and is quite happy.. hmm.. and Syl likes her.. would like pic of Laral's reaction when she gets reply back from Dalinar :P Life before death used as sign off msg, nice
  • hello little bro.. hope you can be more like Tien than mopey Kal ;) Oroden, child of peace
  • sure can understand Lirin, he'd stay behind to help.. that is his chosen place and profession
  • a final msg and showoff before he goes hunting voidbringers

A powerful lie

  • yup, the sketch clearly shows something very wrong in Urithiru.. so Shallan's snapshot is not just physical realm I suppose?
  • truth of her mother's death as Ideal, Shallan progress is seen during her theatre performance and fight against unmade
  • hello Lyn the scout, and Shallan refers to Kal as Brightlord Brooding-Eyes, how cute :P and she's pretending to be elsecaller to hide her lightweaving skills
  • Shallan has worked out to use strata as a guideline to move within Urithiru.. does she notice color differences better like the Returned?
  • Renarin has a blanket, holds cup of steaming tea - was speculated that he'd been off to duplicate Sadeas murder, but that turned out to be unmade... so just feeling cold, or may be after effects of using stormlight? (with nothing left to help with the chill later)
  • Tukar/Emul war mentioned, Tezim the warlord in Tukar (aspect of almighty, which is true if he's indeed Herald)
  • and here we see the pull of Bondsmiths.. is the pull activated only on certain occasions?
  • Dalinar mentions the 'man' with nine shadows.. Renarin turns to Dalinar, eyes wide, jaw dropping (what do you know Renarin dear?)
  • Oathgates - Azimir, Shinovar, Babatharnam, Rall Elorim, Rira, one lost in Aimia - island destroyed, Vedenar, Thaylen City, Shattered Plains, Kholinar
  • delibrations interrupted by Lyn, copy-cat murder spotted

the threads of a screw

  • Shallan notices that Adolin is seriously disturbed about the murder and later staring, aghast, mouth open and eyes wide
  • chapter title about the strata pattern
  • Rlain is with bridge four too.. and Renarin is doing his best to creep out Shallan.. pattern was busy looking at the body?
  • Adolin is now in charge of investigation, one of the murders commited by himself :P Dalinar is missing officers dead and Jasnah as well for political guide
  • Renarin is watching Adolin and pattern is humming softly... just out with what you two are thinking :P

distractions

  • we often see Kal thinking about Hav's instructions, but we never did see him onscreen did we?
  • there again, Syl with the scholarly words - my solemn and important duty to bring happiness, light and joy into your world
  • Gumfrems gemhearts allowed soulcasting of meat... what'd gemhearts of Parshendi allow?
  • Kal's talk of Syl mothering makes her think about it and decide that she'll make wonderful mother :P (I'd not mind her mothering me :D)
  • mothering she'd do - teach little spren to fly, to coast the winds, to harass Kal..okay..and would totally leave them in highprince's shoe..(talk to Lift for more ideas)
  • while Kal's disappointed that he couldn't show off, he finally gets some info on parshmen - 50 or so attacked grain storage, tall, wearing armor
  • Syl hears or infers that the ardent reporting thinks Kal is pretty, but Syl points Kal is anything but.. and then goes to mention her spying on ppl behind closed doors... we'll soon get better from Pattern :D
  • Syl then says Kal liked Shallan, Kal even acknowledges.. yay for Shalladin
  • Adolin come to visit Gallant.. carrying on Syl-Kal converstation, what about Gallant, feels lonely?
  • Adolin observes Ryshadium cannot be won like a blade, but then that shardblades used to be spren who chose their bearers too.. (is it a hint that Ryshadium somehow involved in plate? I'd think not, but surely more than just mount for shardbearers?)
  • Renarin comes to visit, with intention to heal? Glys said something? give us Renarin POV already :-/
  • Renarin has given the dead spren blade to ardents, want Adolin to give away.. Glys wasn't certain but Renarin has blade now
  • Adolin has full confidence Renarin won't hurt but save, Renarin smiles, pulse of Radiance washes through Adolin who sees himself perfected, complete and whole, the man he could be.. (I don't think it is specific to Renarin alone, Shallan seemed to do something similar too).. wrist is healed too :)

the rift

  • Dalinar has shardplate in this flashback.. Sadeas brings up Dalinar's marriage.. Dalinar is only thinking of Navani who'd married Gavilar and Jasnah's been born
  • Rathalas, chasm city, built inside rip in the ground.. similar to Yeddaw?
  • Teleb was the archer in previous flashback.. he died at Narak though
  • I think Dalinar didn't kill the kid and that kid later kidnapped Evi.. don't see why else Dalinar would be ashamed

negotiations

  • in which Azir and Thaylenah don't agree to Dalinar's unite quest
  • we get another hint that all is not as assumed regarding Parshendi - in Azir they're negotiating and in Thaylenah they took off with the ships
  • Dalinar wishes that he could speak to the leaders instead of spanreed.. you just had to ask stormfather :P
  • Mr. T is coming though.. even by end of part-1 we don't get a clue which way he'll swing, I think Sanderson will sweep our feets either way

chaperone

  • time for 'no mating' :D and too much going Shadolin way.. I think it will end up with all 3 together, Sha-Ado-Kal FTW
  • we see Shallan thinking her illusions more and more as separate persons.. because she upped with Ideals or she's losing control?
  • wow, even a knife can't scratch the stones of Urithiru.. just what is it made up of? entirely soulcast?
  • Adolin saying born under the sign of the nine led to too many speculations.. I think it is just a red-herring, purposefully put by Mr. Sanderson to make us go crazy :P
  • Shallan wants to glimpse Adolin's back of left thigh (birthmark)... and thinks about creative applications for her tongue..
  • Adolin names pattern as Shallanspren :P which pattern sniffs at.. and Shallan shows off by creating Adolin illusion in shardplate.. he pokes at it and then has the audacity to poke at pattern!!!
  • secrets are important (when Adolin asks why she pretends to be elsecaller) and agrees.. come on Shallan, ask him already :P
  • dividing by zero :D :D :D (after TWoK/WoR re-read, this is no surprise, pattern does show plenty of interest in maths)
  • pleasure of living - not everything can be captured in art :)
  • aww pattern, took a while to understand what Shallan meant by chaperone :P and he breaks their moment of intimacy... they promise to not mess it up.. hope so..

squires can't capture

  • on first read, I thought we'd get something about Kal's squires.. Sanderson does re-use chapter titles later, so who knows.. we might see it again
  • Herdaz seems to be famous for lot of things... dish in previous chapter and now playing cards..
  • yellow spren spots Kal after Kal had time to watch them and make some preliminary judgement that they'd been wrong about a lot regarding Parshendi/Parshmen

brightness radiant

  • Perel's body found in same area as Sadeas.. did he look like Sadeas as well? that stretches beyond reasonable for me..
  • oh pattern, don't say things like that... but interesting that they'll send another to bond if he dies.. why? Shallan would have break the bond.. or is he volunteering to die?
  • Shallan becomes brightness radiant, to escape from thinking of what she'd had done with pattern as blade.. but to also incorporate personality to weild sword.. and refers to Shallan as third person.. even going as far to address him as brightlord Kholin :D
  • she read somewhere or instinctively knew pattern can dull the edges?
  • I think a 3rd benefit of latest avatar is that she wouldn't blush from all the touching Adolin did...
  • Adolin never thought blade as something alive in the past, but as something special.. so, at least so far he hasn't been trying to revive or something
  • Shallan uses her drawing to improve a whole lot.. just like that :) feels like some cognitive aspect has come into play
  • slept in peace - best result to cap up a good day :)

wrapped three times

  • I remember that Dalinar tells a story here.. Sanderson is very good when it comes to such things..
  • why didn't Dalinar bond with the honorblade as an extra safety measure? it doesn't scream.. may be he asked and stormfather refused?
  • here we get a reason why Odium might be willing to agree to a champion.. fighting directly might bring other shards.. and he's been hurt before (Honor did it? and they don't heal.. interesting) and defeating that champion only gains time for humans.. not permanent solution
  • honorblade would open the oathgates too..
  • Rial of bridge 13.. speaks his mind.. worldhopper? or just false trail..
  • Navani has sent him a fabrial - shows times, predicted highstorm as well as painrial.. many have speculated that painrial plays a role in getting back Evi's memories.. but talking with Kadash had brought up memories too (though not of Evi)
  • look who's back - our grumpy Returned Zahel.. why didn't Dalinar ask Zahel to practice with?
  • for some reason, the wrestling brings 'Dangal' to mind, Aamir's bout with his daughter, not the one early on with state champion
  • Dalinar hasn't felt Thrill in months..
  • Iriali queen wants to communicate now, tide reading prompting the move..hmm
  • Dalinar asks to set up in sparring area itself, forces Kadash to spar with swords..
  • the queen speaks of One like Ym did..parshmen have offered gracious terms to Iriali as well :D she brings up Adolin's shardplate as something Dalinar stole..
  • talk of tradition with Kadash leads to the story... and gives us another point that Gavilar/Dalinar captured Kholinar..
  • Dalinar shows off power during his argument with Kadash, and instinctively binds Kadash to stone.. like Szeth/Kal know to do.. then asks Kadash to prove that current Vorinism is same as what Heralds taught.. I hope Kadash does find something about this :) or may be it'll be mute when Jasnah returns
  • painrial already working? but I don't think Dalinar used it as such.. anyway, he can hear Evi's name and remember face too

trapped in shadows

  • Kal remembers being here, as a slave before reaching shattered plains, one of the escape attempts that lasted a week
  • Kal might be wrong in assuming he understood parshmen, but talking about it does improve his understanding..
  • Kal is afraid that Syl is behaving oddly, but she manages to tell the yellow spren is watching and that she's acting as windspren.. and Syl thinks the spren is a 'she'
  • all the higher spren have some instinct to be afraid of voidsprens?
  • Syl remarkably infers/knows that everstorm filled the holes of parshmen, bridging the gaps..healed, connection refounded, identity restored..
  • parshmen having worked so many things for men, I'd have expected them to know somethings that Kal said.. or may be it just seems like that in hindsight after Kal put it that way

double vision

  • maintaining illusions uses very little stormlight compared to initial amount needed to make it, probably just the amount that leaks?
  • Syl dislikes Adolin because he has dead spren blade, but pattern has come to accept humans deal with corpses all the time - chairs, doors, food, clothing, etc (Syl, do learn :P).. he likes him.. did he comment much about Adolin in WoR? if not, why?
  • I think we can infer here that Shallan still has truths to be said.. not a full KR yet.. what terrible truths left Shallan? do all lightweavers have such suppressed truths? and what truths did Shallan speak to get at least to blade level the first time?
  • and here Veil wonders why merchants selling same things congregated (Yalb had said the same to Shallan) - does it mean Shallan borrowed something from him?
  • wow, wells in Urithiru always full.. because of mountains with water resource?
  • all the shaking and coughing from drinking the wine doesn't disturb the illusion? perhaps not enough to be observable.. the barkeep even patted Shallan on the back
  • all sorts of speculation who the bouncer Jor is.. I'll just pass over, too much to keep track off
  • Jor speaks of knowing porters to get Shallan back safely.. and that leads to All's Alley crime previous day.. so Veil wanted to go, in the process hurting elbow and discovering stormlight will cure drunkenness too :D
  • Horneater white - takes off paint nicely... and here Veil gets tossed and rolls on ground.. her lightweaving sure must have improved to the point of staying put no matter what as long as she has stormlight to feed the leakage.. whatever, I sure like how she stabs the Horneater to get her place back
  • and then shows off ghostbloods symbol to Betha..but one short younger woman seems interested in Veil.. she finally gets the lead she needed... during first read, this was really a shock and interesting turn of events... sort of stuff that gets analysed a lot in forums

the subtle art of diplomacy

  • in which Dalinar proves that he could be helpful in political situations in his own brutal way :P
  • Dalinar's favorite knife with whitespine ivory on grip is missing, so he goes into storming highstorm to ask Teleb if he lent it to him :P
  • by instinct, he avoids large boulder.. too many instincts shown by MCs, may be Sanderson has hidden something in them too?.. he also sees a gargantuan figure moving on spindly glowing legs - thunderclast?
  • Gavilar speaking about Codes of War, 30+ years in flashback... his own thinking about kingdom and changes brought about by birth of Jasnah.. or something guiding even so far back because desolation was coming?

cords to bind

  • Kal and Sah have great discussion... I think there won't ever be a happy ending between humans and parshmen in this series, may be gruding accomodation.. but true cooperation? that seems unlikely..
  • Syl can tell whether highstorm is gonna come soon

set up to fail

  • how long until pattern grows bored of 'no mating' quips? :P
  • well well, Shallan says Mother Cultivation here... remember somewhere she considered that as pagan worshipping or something?
  • Adolin makes a good joke :D relationships requiring investment - literally here as Shallan wants infused sphere :P anyway that leads to her observing that infused spheres long laster in Urithiru
  • hmm, parshmen from shattered plains too marching to Alethkar... led by yellow spren like the one with Kal? and they presumably got orders from the ancestors mentioned by Ulim?
  • Thanadal and Vamah stayed back to control the warcamps in shattered plains? and for the gemhearts?
  • Shallan says Adolin is like Dalinar and that gets Adolin thinking and worrying.. but talking of secrets, Shallan is happy to let it be..
  • at least in part one, both Mraize and Mr. T didn't do stuff to get us worried.. and we don't even know for sure they'd do something (that we consider as) bad

the darkness within

  • the 'chicken' with Mraize - I agree with speculations that it is probably like the one in Sixth of Dusk.. also inevitably I think of Braize when his name comes up
  • Adolin does give back more than he gets from Ialai here and I like it obviously
  • ppl who've watched Rajni movies can't but help think of famous Padayappa scene, a lady sitting with no chair for the guest..
  • why does Mraize think Shallan has sensed the wrongness in Urithiru? and he says info on Helaran will be payment for the task of expunging the darkness
  • noice, Shallan fetches tea, but not for Ialai :P but Ialai isn't one to be fazed.. she would wager that it was someone in Kholin camp who killed Sadeas.. she know or doesn't about Adolin.. I keep thinking she'll be like Sevanna from WoT
  • Amaram is in Urithiru.. Shallan gapes.. can't wait what Kal will think when he comes back.. and speaking of coming back - the highstorm is back

storming strange

  • last chapter ends with highstorm coming and this chapter title storming has storming in it
  • caravans out of Revolar don't show up, presumably because parshmen in charge of that place now
  • have the two storms met again and caused havoc on land? or somehow stormfather timing to avoid meeting the everstorm on land?
  • hello yellow spren, who behaves a bit like Syl.. with Shin eyes.. why? even her walk relates to stone somehow.. how long the spren been in physical realm.. if it is since everstorm first came, it sure could speak and know lot more than Syl did intially

men of blood and sorrow

  • so Dalinar-Evi was causal betrothal just like Adolin-Shallan
  • Mr. T and co have arrived.. and hello Malata the dust- I mean releaser
  • parshmen made a push for Vedenar but were fended off and they went east... how many are going to end up in Alethkar..
  • Navani had called Dalinar as gemheart and Dalinar calls her that.. cute
  • stormfather annoyed to confirm that Evi's memories coming back is not his doing.. Dalinar had asked for his pain to be taken away, and memories were taken too..
  • Tukari reply: warning, from Tezim the Great, last and first man, Herald of Heralds, bearer of Oathpact... none are radiant but him, fury ignited because of unlawful capture of Urithiru..wants them to swear to him, only he can lead to deliverance..

the girl who looked up

  • uh, is that a drawing of darkness in Urithiru? interestingly has 9 figures
  • yet another chapter with fantastic lore telling by Mr. Sanderson - he should consider writing a lore collection book
  • Shallan creates so many illusions here(even one of Kal) and more realistic, a prelude to fight at end of part-1
  • pattern humming happily.. give us a SA animation series already, each chapter can be one or more episodes
  • poor Rock, gets stabbed because of Veil's investigations in All's Alley
  • Ishnah, the short younger woman, excellent writer, wants to join ghostbloods

blackthorn unleashed

  • well, we've seen Dalinar get blade in flashbacks.. though plate was in background... perhaps we'll see his bonding with Ryshadium in flashbacks to come
  • when asked for orders, Dalinar says to stay out of his way... some didn't and got killed..
  • too much Thrill brings redness to his vision.. will that come into picture with champion stuff? surge of strength - from Thrill? like he did in saving Elhokar from chasmfiend?
  • after killing Kalanor, a voice within - that's it? weren't we promised more? - looks like Vorin's been corrupted and instead of fighting for humans in Tranquiline Halls, they're for Odium instead
  • Dalinar manages to come out of Thrill seeing Gavilar's welcome and promises to himself to never be king.. well you'll be highking instead :D

playing pretend

  • the sketches get creepier... give us a happy one
  • large gathering of enemy in Marat.. Iriali striking eastward (perhaps seize Rira, Babatharnam).. areas like Triax continue to go dark
  • those in Kholinar started working when highstorm came, but then cut off - enemy seems to locate spanreeds.. wow, if spanreeds go out of operation all over the world, it will isolate Urithiru from contacting them and vice versa.. like cutting off phone/internet connection for us
  • how did Kal manage to send a glyph.. probably their group haven't got orders regarding spanreeds
  • really find it difficult to believe Perel looked similar to Sadeas, was wandering near that area alone... that too within day/days of Sadeas murder.. with Rock, being Horneater with similar build(not similar look) is acceptable.. any Horneater in that area at that time could've got stabbed..
  • thanks Adolin for spilling the beans.. still better him than Kal trying to tell Shallan :P crazy prediction, Shallan knew about what Helaran was doing? may be he knew as well that Shallan was KR? that'll be a truth she has to speak to progress?
  • Shallan wondering if she could leave illusions behind.. sure please find out, might help Veil :)
  • and she finds some sketches she doesn't remember doing... all super creepy, pattern is confused and asks if they should run
  • only 12 left, too small a number for squires or more than expected for lightweavers?

another option

  • Azir stubborn, will try to close the portal instead of accept Dalinar's help.. Fen spurns too.. and he thinks again if only he could speak in person..
  • Lyn with important news again.. Stormfather quick to thunder noticing Dalinar carrying Oathbringer..the spren hates him less than others and so doesn't scream as loudly.. and Dalinar asks the question we've been expecting of Adolin.. but stormfather says he knows of no way..
  • Amaram calls Dalinar a hypocrite and I do find myself agreeing in a way..
  • Dalinar goes to his room to cool down and finds Mr. T by the heating fabrial.. Dalinar quotes from TWoK and Mr. T too mentions hypocrisy..
  • surprisingly, stormfather initiates conversation.. saying Nohadon was good man.. and Dalinar delivers a punch - sometimes hypocrite is a person in the process of changing :)
  • Dalinar wants to see vision with Nohadon again, mentions fetching Navani to record.. and just like that stormfather asks if he should show the vision to Navani as well :D took you long enough
  • and best part is Dalinar need not be in storm.. so Fen and others, be very prepared in coming highstorms

No backing down

  • interesting that Shallan presents Veil as another of her own employees :D
  • trust Sanderson to put in a twist even in small details.. Shallan asks Pattern to get Adolin and soldiers.. how far can Pattern go from Shallan? is there even a limitation?
  • how many spheres Shallan is carrying? she's already used some in creating Veil and in dashing to this place.. and we know she'd be using plenty more ahead..
  • so happy to see bridge four coming here :)
  • wow, even pattern is fooled by her illusory dress.. it really must have improved a lot... and Lyn is here again.. asked to make maps for retreat/wayback
  • Renarin mentions he could feel something ancient down there..
  • Dilid, one of ten fools mentioned.. art - pics of Herald made of 1000s of tiles.. will we get those pics? on the walls - figure hovering before large blue disc (ppl have connected it with world-hopping) and Honor/Cultivation (Shallan again connecting her with pagan.. would pattern know something of Cultivation?)
  • Adolin calls Shallan to show ruined library.. (some have speculated they might get restored by a KR)
  • Renarin says the darkness is Unmade Re-Shephir, the midnight mother.. mesmerized and not moving, but shouted order from Teft snaps him out.. and later heals those injured :) Kal would certainly like him better.. now for Lift to join as well :P
  • Shallan realizes she knows Re-Shephir and what she's doing.. how? anyway, she shows how it is done, a glowing radiant force.. reminds me of patronus vs Dementor from Harry Potter
  • Shallan says the creature has been watching her, changing how she sees the tower, feel like she understands her, unexplained connection...
  • chapter ends with Shallan placing her safehand against the pulsing mass.. (will we get an explanation later why she'd used safehand particularly?) .. imagine a book ending like this :P

mother of lies

  • Shallan feels the unmade trying to rip Pattern's bond and insert herself... I think we'll see someone, may be even KR/Heralds, bonded to unmade later in the series
  • splinter of soul of something even more terrible (Odium?) - like a creationspren, but so very wrong..
  • been trapped centuries ago.. terrified of happening again, been done by lightweaver - hence the fear
  • Shallan lies that she wasn't afraid.. drawing upon Jasnah's lesson.. Re-Shephir breaks and flees.. Shallan feels tower is now different and that unmade won't return..
  • the pillar now revealed - 1000s upon 1000s of cut gemstones..

demands of the storm

  • Kal estimates 40-50k parshmen gathered in Revolar.. I always wonder how characters easily estimate thousands, let alone hundreds
  • Syl hiding in Kal's curls, awww.. lots of yellow spren, zipping and dancing (just like Syl).. Yixli, the yellow spren who talked to Kal, speaks for him
  • stormform Parshendi are called Fused.. Kal decides to leave, taking the spheres from Khen, saying highstorm is close and that he doesn't wish to be enemy
  • Syl swats a glory spren and says 'Mine' :) I side with ppl telling she wants a spren to show her own glory, rather than meaning that Kal is hers
  • and Syl comes with another wordy sentence, I am not gonna try to understand :P
  • Syl-Kal again have discussion on what's right and perceptions.. Syl corrects that oaths are about what they together see as right/wrong
  • he terms it as Sylblade :P will he think about another name? or just how he thinks about this form of Syl..
  • again the mantra - Do better, from last time I noticed, Dalinar was also saying it..
  • the ones attacking Kal, Fused or some kind of Parshendi KRs? blackish violet glow, like dark stormlight..red eyes..looked different than Fused.. Syl cries out with pain and surprise, anything significant in that?
  • the PKRs not yet comfortable with lashing.. or troubled because of highstorm? inside highstorm they are sent spinning in the wind..
  • Kal using windspren to deflect the storm, even on small scale, was super duper.. even Syl is impressed, that is high praise :)
  • stormfather helps to drop Kal at Urithiru.. though storms don't reach Urithiru high, winds still soar over I suppose

Company

  • Shallan is with Palona, few hours after the fight, drinking tea and still feeling a chill from the fight with unmade
  • Adolin comes, Shallan thinks news is about Kal, but it is Jasnah at last :)
  • I feel like there is continuity issue here or may be just not mentioned... Kal must have come after their fight with Unmade (can't imagine him not joining), he came with the storm, which should have come after the fight as well.. narrow gap to fit in all..

interlude 1 - Puuli

  • lighthouse keeper, secretly happy as everstorm has wrecked havoc but gives him wood to gather and consoles others on the tragedy
  • cliffs not been there in his grandpa's time.. how long ago is that? they attribute it to Kelek(assoicating with stormfather, just like elsewhere stormfather assoicated with Jezrien)
  • grandpa also had warned about men coming from hidden island of Origin (like in Hoid's story to Kal?) - they'll come with Light in pockets, to destroy.. worldhoppers? or Odium's army from other worlds?

interlude 2 - ellista

  • Jokasha monastery - western slopes of horneater peaks.. rains with highstorm, but not terrible violence
  • three data points for everstorm, consistent speed unlike highstorm.. spanreeds still active here.. talking to whom?
  • wasn't one of Aes Sedai in WoT also fond of novels? :P
  • Urv interrupts her reading, asks about progress on Bendthel's collected Dawnchant, old versions.. they've accepted Navani's translation key but don't believe in Dalinar's vision nonsense
  • Ellista has proof that once Dawnchant was used all across Roshar.. codified written language, not that everyone used same language.. after desolation, forms of present day languages emerged
  • Sanderson poking fun of certain types of books? ;) Urv has sequels to share in return for translating stubborn section of Dawnchant.. 'particular patron' has strict deadline.. I am guessing Mr. T and co

the rhythm of the lost

  • Venli is leading/commanding group of her loyal friends.. we are introduced to Ulim, forming human shape (Venli wonders why human shape for Odium spren)
  • Ulim asks to spread out and search, Venli humming to fury asks why should she continue to obey (how long Ulim been with her? that night Gavilar was killed?)
  • only a fraction of 10s of thousands remained after the clash at Narak
  • Demid finds Eshonai, dead.. Ulim asks Demind to raise his hand so that he could stand on his palm.. not able to float like Syl then?
  • Ulim thinks Eshonai drowned the floodwaters..staying in place with blade rammed into stone.. Venli mentions that humans used to hack their corpses for gemhearts..
  • Ulim obeys his leaders who know exactly what they're doing, not Venli.. he escaped, spren of redemption... wants them to gather the shards, be away from men who stink of Honor... to see what Parshendi ancestors need them to do
  • the dead Parshendi are the ones in charge.. cognitive realm? Braize?
  • as Venli prepares to go, she notices the comet-like spren we've seen in WoR with Eshonai

a lecture

  • finally part two.. and bridge four/Jasnah mentioned, yay.. looking forward to read them
  • and finally sketch of Urithiru.. the one with oathgates look like upper part of a human with a necklace.. who's the radiant, Kal?
  • epigraph - sigh, we don't know who wrote the preface.. and now something else has started in a similar frustating short sentences without context :-/
  • next day since Jasnah returned.. come on, what were their first words on reunion..
  • Shallan been recording and analyzing her experience with Unmade, but finally couldn't stop herself from going in search of Jasnah.. back to the place where they fought the unmade.. no more feeling of wrongness
  • the pillar with gemstones - all ten varieties, fused together..
  • back to Jasnah questioning and lecturing Shallan... guess we are not gonna get Jasnah's story for a while, if at all
  • fabrial made by capturing a spren(how?) and imprisoning inside gemstone.. Jasnah asks for sketch of the pillar, get proportions and colors right.. (for what purpose?) Shallan feeling touchy...
  • Jasnah apologizes for what happened on Wind's Pleasure.. why now, what did they speak the previous night?
  • well, didn't Shallan read about Radiant orders in WoR? may be didn't have much detail what each order could do
  • Jasnah explains a bit about her escape, important point being coming back from Shadesmar is difficult - need to find transfer point where Shadesmar and their realm touch.. and Jasnah says she feels lost.. we do too fyi :P asks about Windrunner(again what did they speak, too much good stuff happening off screen) specifically, hasn't met Malata yet?

resistance

  • epigraph - yup, I will do well to read them all together later, hopefully others would have analysed it all by the time I finish this book
  • yay, so this is gonna be Dalinar intruding world leaders.. first up Fen
  • scene is that one where Dalinar fought with poker and saw KRs glowing and flying and healing etc
  • Dalinar now acting as the female KR who'd healed.. the male Windrunner KR lashing her.. Dalinar tries to get some info on plate.. mention of Harkaylain, whatever that is.. stormfather says it is futile to ask.. still Dalinar decides that he should get Navani/Jasnah here
  • Unmade always mentioned as total 9.. what if there are more/less?
  • Dalinar still about wanting to know how to get the armor.. stormfather very helpful - speak the words :D
  • Fen has managed to put up a resistance in quick time.. stormfather helpfully slows down the vision when Dalinar says he don't know if there's time to explain the vision
  • Fen does seem to reconsider, seeing Dalinar speak in person.. but I too have doubts now, do we know for sure these visions are true and not tampered? :P
  • Fen has at least made one thing clear.. Dalinar should be his own self, not try to be diplomatic :P

first into the sky

  • epigraph - wait, Cephandrius is Hoid isn't it? the name was used in Secret History
  • yay, bridge four POV chapter, will we get one on Gaz and co?
  • school test dream.. do you know Sigzil that I've had similar exam dreams after I finished graduation.. fist bump... even last night I had one which included something of SA, but don't remember now
  • I know chamber pots and latrine have been mentioned, but everytime I read about characters waking up and going for breakfast without dump being mentioned, I cringe as though it was myself doing so
  • trust The Lopen to hang from ceiling :D and chapter title pretty much promises someone's gonna fly
  • Sigzil's slave brands have healed but tattoos remain, other bridgemen too.. just opposite to Kal :P.. hope he'll mention about those who lost limbs
  • mentions Teft, but what is that other thing? flying?
  • Kal doing push-ups.. Sig mentions Kal should get a real scribe, if that happens, it'll be Lyn?
  • does Sigzil know about world hopping? he mentions some things are just wrong.. Teft has gotten into something.. the mystery is building up
  • well if they need to recruit, aren't there so many other bridge units to look into? will a ghostblood get inside now? :P
  • talking of Lyn, here she is.. conveying that unusual request has been fulfilled - Kal wants a place to replace the chasms?
  • Lyn continues with them, and accepts she's been making excuses to run messages to bridge four..
  • wow, so soon what I thought is said, Kal asks her to join bridge four (her jaw drops) - as scribe :D she wants to be KR of course and passes scribe offer
  • Kal then says she could join the tryouts for bridge four position.. that's more like it and Sig throws Kal's words right back at him :P :P where is Syl! I want to know her opinion on this
  • Kal hasn't told them about Moash.. everstorm once in 9 days (that number is hardly surprising) but no mention if two storms meet and cause more destruction than single passing of them
  • okay chapter title is metaphor..or idiom, whatever
  • spy with too many spren.. that's a good in-world saying.. why'd quartermaster think it would've been difficult for Kal to get permission to use large pieces of gemhearts... stories about KRs and use of stormlight should be well known by now...

hero

  • flashback time.. Dalinar and his love for fireplace.. I don't much like Evi so far.. every other sentence about the One
  • Old Magic and pagan mentioned in same breath.. I find it very odd... I'd have taught something magical granting wishes(along with curse) would be considered divine, not pagan..
  • Rathalas, rift... they're demanding blade, heir is back - Dalinar didn't kill him.. so flashbacks are going to lead to Evi's kidnapping/death and later to nightwatcher hopefully

the last time we march

  • Rock POV.. who's next, Teft? we got The Lopen in WoR itself..
  • Kal has brought his crew (plus ppl from other bridge crews, soldiers suggested by Dalinar and 5 women scouts, I suppose Lyn is there too) down to shattered plains again and Rock has found that he'd missed this place..
  • some have already said first Ideal, Kal wants everyone to swear it if they want to be his squires.. Kal is assigning tasks and notices Teft is missing.. mystery mystery mystery.. is he the one going to deliver awesome part two ending? I shouldn't have been active on cosmere subreddits, seeing it even without actively looking to read the various 'spoiler' free reviews
  • so Kal will help the scouts instead of Teft... Lyn sure will like that :P
  • Dabbid still not talking.. Hobber ain't healed yet too.. Kal knows about Renarin's healing power?
  • Rock thinks he knows all about cooking and things, gets proven otherwise..
  • The Lopen can word anything to his favor :P
  • ah, Kal himself seeing to Hobber about the stormlight.. Rock catched up to him and bows to Syl..
  • Bisig, one of the injured by Szeth draws stormlight.. yay
  • ever since I saw that music could be tied to magic on Roshar and Syl's dancing mentioned, I am more prone to notice that.. like here Syl dancing.. yet another reason for SA animation series
  • Kal correctly deducts Rock was 4th son, become 3rd with his bro's death.. but won't talk about it for now..
  • Elhokar has apparently been talking to Kal and come to visit again.. wants to be squire I suppose? anyway Kal agrees to go with him to Kholinar.. about 4 weeks to train his squires
  • hmm they've recovered their old bridge which has fallen wedged in a chasm.. is that going to be become something more too? like a plate? :D
  • Rock mentions the two storms haven't met over a populated area.. how do they know? and yet again no mention if they ripped off land like it happened in Narak
  • Rock always been a cook, even as guard.. Renarin joins Rock.. did he consider offering to heal the bridge four crew who'd lost limbs - after all he healed those fighting the unmade?
  • looks like Renarin would be happy to do assigned tasks.. gets fidgety when there is nothing to do
  • Rock too hasn't seen Glys.. Renarin hasn't been able to make illusions despite Shallan's instructions..
  • I forgot Rlain.. he's there too.. and Renarin goes to him.. Rock knows a story about unmade in his peaks.. but of course, not being told today :P
  • Rock draws stormlight himself.. and then later notices lot of spren gathering on a plateau around a tall spren woman..glowing faint blue.. come to recruit?
  • Syl comes to say he is bordering on being silly with his worship.. Syl kind of remembers the spren woman's voice - Phendorana, reprimanding Syl..trouble for seeking out Kal.. yet here they are now..won't speak to her though.. Syl grins that they were wrong :P
  • Rock puts spheres in bowl and goes to meet the spren gathering.. wow, one of them drews out stormlight and zips off.. can Syl do it too?
  • and finally Hobber draws stormlight too.. this chapter is packed and then Rock had to notice plume of smoke in west (warcamp? the Parshendi who refused stormform?)
  • ah bridge run, powered by stormlight :) beleagured caravan - some on fire.. attack by PKRs.. Rock meets his family come to the plains at last... they'd managed to kill at least one Parshendi with a white arrow
  • Renarin went to bring Adolin and troops, and saved lives with his healing :)
  • something very wrong in Peaks too.. well Roshar is sure crumbling
  • one last bridge run, because they'll take to skies soon..

broken people

  • stormfather swears in Dalinar's vision.. odd that :D and even odder, Dalinar carrying spheres and healing in the vision..
  • last desolation battlefield.. Stoneward changing rock itself.. a surge Dalinar can use, but serve differently.. men are fighting alongside voidbringers..
  • today's guests - Navani and Jasnah.. Navani has buillied a radiant to look at fabiral :P and thinks they have been viewing the ancient fabirals wrongly :D
  • I think this battlefield is in shinovar.. 9 blades in stone.. so Heralds already gone.. Dalinar realizes Heralds had lied, enemy not defeated for good..
  • stormfather's view of events is distorted.. relates the story how desolations started - many souls of creatures who had been slain, angry and terrible.. given great power by Odium... start of desolations..when they died, refused to pass on.. stormform aided by spren of parshmen long dead..some of these spren are mere forces now.. fragments of minds given power by Odium..others were more awake..each rebirth further injures their minds..
  • reborn using bodies of parshmen to become Fused..even before Fused learned to use surges, men couldn't fight them..creatures men killed were reborn.. and so came Oathpact..
  • 10 ppl became Heralds.. gave themselves up.. Odium is sealed by powers of Honor and Cultivation, Heralds sealed the spren of dead into damnation (Braize?).. Heralds went to Honor who gave them this right, this oath.. they thought it would end war forever, but they and Honor were wrong..
  • Honor let power blind him to truth.. spren and gods can't break oaths, but men can and will.. 10 Heralds sealed in damnation, trapping voidbringers.. however, if any one agreed to bend oath and let voidbringers past, it opened flood and all could return.. which started a desolation
  • Heralds were tortured by spirits they trapped, could share pain because of bond.. but eventually someone always yielded
  • once one broke, all 10 Heralds returned to Roshar.. fought, led men.. Oathpact delayed Fused from returning immediately.. but each time after desolation, Heralds returned to Damnation to seal enemy again.. (all the sealing enemy stuff reminds strongly of WoT obviously :P)
  • cycle repeated, at first respite between desolations was long, 100s of years.. but later came separated less than 10 years.. less than 1 years between last two.. souls of Heralds worn thin..broke almost as soon as they were caught and tortured in damnation
  • Fused, souls of dead from long ago, they loathe you(meaning humans?).. not rational..become permeated with Odium's essence, pure hatred..they will see this world destroyed in order to destroy mankind.. they have returned now
  • after each desolation, those who died automatically went to damnation.. those who survived went back willingly..been warned that if any lingered, it could lead to disaster..any they needed to be together in damnation to share the burden of torture if one was captured..by luck or cowardice, only Taln died in last desolation..
  • the nine living realized that one of them had never broken..each of the nine had at some point been one to give in..they determined perhaps they didn't all need to return..decided to stay here, risking eternal desolation.. but hoping Taln would alone be enough to hold it all together..he wasn't meant to have joined them in first place, wasn't king/scholar/general
  • Dalinar realizes it really was Taln, the madman who showed up with blade.. Oathpact has been weakened almost to annihilation, Odium has created his own storm.. Fused who're killed do not return to damnation now, reborn in next everstorm..
  • stormfather confirms that the blade Dalinar got wasn't honorblade, doesn't know what happened.. Dalinar wants to speak to madman now, but of course he ain't there anymore.. good luck asking Amaram :D
  • Navani asks if this caused KRs to rebel, cause Recreance - nope says stormfather, deeper secret that..he won't speak because they'll abandon oaths like the KRs
  • a Shin man stumbles upon the honorblades.. will Dalinar realize the significance of that?
  • wonder what Jasnah learns here.. and I guess this chapter will be over analyzed to death in fandom, looking for clues..
  • at least the second highstorm since fight with midnight mother, the pillar recharged or not? and where is Wit!!!

notes

  • more than week since meeting Jasnah.. Shallan feeling better but at the same time less like herself..hmm
  • Dalinar has called meeting of KRs, Jasnah has suggested basement..worried about being spied upon.. the ghostbloods at least might well be
  • library floor cleaned, no info whether they could recover anything or chance of it later on..
  • Adolin and Elhokar visiting Vedenar, Malata working the Oathgates.. other KRs are here.. what'll happen to Adolin/Elhokar - that's the end of part two????
  • Shallan mentions Kal looming like thundercloud..thinking about Kal killing Helaran.. but smothers emotion..
  • Kal is usual broody self, summarizing Heralds as crazy, traitor and Honor as dead.. and says parshmen ain't their enemies when Jasnah says they must curb voidbringer assault
  • Jasnah disagrees, even if Kal's report indicates they're not immediately destructive, they're in process of conquering the world.. an enormous threat..
  • yay, just what we expected.. sparks between Kal and Jasnah :)
  • strange to see Jasnah not even consider the points both Dalinar and Kal make.. just single viewpoint that they are crafty, ancient, angry.. may be it is like that lesson she showed to Shallan regarding the thugs?
  • Dalinar not been able to contact anyone in Kholinar, stormfather found it to be dark spot.. uh ho
  • Jasnah wants to find Heralds and then... kill them.. Kal replies, Woman, are you insane???????????????????
  • and sparks continue... :D but Jasnah brings up similar thing Mr. T said.. sacrifice one or more Heralds vs exterminate entire parshmen so no hosts left for enemy
  • Jasnah snaps, Kal replies something witty to which she smiles :D Jasnah is all fired up with suggestions, while Shallan is Doodling. Kal's face. Bring it on :D
  • then Jasnah basically rips apart Shallan.. but Shallan has decided she's going to keep Veil secret.. that sure won't create problems.. nope Sir..
  • pattern says this room has memories...like library? more secure than paper? that gemstone wall? anyway she passes on pattern's msg to Jasnah who thanks and says will investigate the place in shadesmar
  • meeting starts again after break.. Jasnah keen on getting Shin to join (does she suspect about the honorblades?)
  • after meet, Shallan gets a msg and letter.. which would tell her about 'deceased' Helaran - acolyte of Skybreaker KRs

Questions, peeks and inferences

  • at least two major institutions on Roshar, other than ourselves, which presaged return of voidbringers and desolations..
  • one is Sons of Honor, with Gavilar as driving force in their expansion..brought in Amaram..worked to return desolations.. so that Heralds will show up.. restore KRs and strength of Vorin church..effort to cause desolations likely the reason he was assassinated..though others in palace that night had reason to see him dead
  • second is Skybreakers, who knew desolations might return..led by Nale..they didn't betray their oaths during Recreance..maintained continuous clandestine line from ancient days.. Nale believed other KRs coming would hasten return of voidbringers..
  • Heralds not be seen as allies to man any longer..those not completely insane have been broken..Nale ruthless and last two decades or longer, dealing with anyone close to bonding a spren(how'd he find them all).. somtimes he recruited and made them skybreakers(how!!!!!).. used minions to help.. like Helaran
  • her mom had intimate contact with Skybreaker acolyte, Helaran recruited because Nale was impressed..and also learned that one of her family was close to bonding a spren..believed Helaran was the one they wanted..
  • Helaran not yet proven worthy of spren bond, might have been sent as a test or by himself went to kill Amaram
  • they also possibly suspected someone in Amaram's army close to bonding spren(Kal).. but likelier that attack on Amaram simply because he was Sons of Honor..
  • from spying on Skybreakers, ghostbloods have records showing only member of Amaram's army to have bonded spren was eliminated (oh, so many complications leading to Kal avoiding Nale's attention.. but if Nale found other radiants, Kal should still have been noticed in shattered plains - anyway ghostbloods feel bridgeman was not known to them and thus wasn't killed)
  • and pattern helpfully says, secrets - lies in the letter :D
  • interesting way to destroy the letter.. by washing off ink and shredding it.. not burning, because no wood for fire?
  • Shallan increasingly wants to be Veil.. and 'Veil' says Shallan been bigger pain than usual.. is this gonna be book for Shallan to fall like Kal did in WoR?
  • well well, suddenly Shallan comes in and tells game results accurately.. what happened to Veil?
  • nice, fake money for gambling :D
  • great, Ishnah following Veil by disguising as washerwoman...and Shallan/Veil plans to use her finally.. wants her to teach her squires, I mean Gaz and co into spies

on the ground looking up

  • it is Teft POV indeed.. so who next, Skar?
  • Teft waking up like this reminds so much of Axies..
  • Sadeas's men jump the line for well water.. Kholin soldier objects but relents.. what about other 6 highprince soldiers? not around?
  • uh oh.. Teft is moss addict.. that was what it was about in WoR too? did Kal follow up why Teft had missed training on plateau?
  • wow, Teft had felt wrongness too.. has a spren.. well Kal does show up to take him back.. still feel bridge 4 should have told Kal about Teft as soon as he returned
  • and I suppose Syl hasn't seen the spren too.. or is that Teft's imagination?

consequences

  • Gawx's turn to get the visions... is Lift back yet?
  • well well.. Gawx blunders his way to Jezrien preaching that they've won and he will lead the charge for Tranquiline Halls..and Dalinar had to notice he has dark eyes :D
  • nice, Gawx thinks Heralds have given him this vision and wonders why Dalinar has been brought too :D whom he think as enemy
  • no Dalinar, nobody piled up thousands of little cremlings.. Aimian...
  • wow, Gawx had learned a lot of history...
  • Gosh!!!!!!! Lift is here in the visions!!!!!! wow.. because of her unusual connections to cognitive realm? and she's not even visited Gawx yet on the way back from Yeddaw
  • even stormfather is perplexed how Lift got in :P yep she is kickass :D but later realizes it as nightwatcher's doing
  • and she takes Gawx out of the vision.. now what... why you do this Lift :-/

spearman

  • epigraph still frustating.. and oops, it is Moash, not Skar
  • four voidbringers descend upon Moash and pals.. Graves killed before he could summon blade..
  • all three colors - red/black/white... dark stormlight clinging to each of them.. Diagram had predicted even those.. hmm
  • wow, Moash abandons shardblade when he sees spear.. somehow uses his knowledge from Kal's lashings and kills the voidbringer, who couldn't/cannot heal wounds with dark stormlight
  • Moash surrenders when offered the opportunity.. breaks his bond with shardblade.. gets hauled off along with all the shards

the bright side

  • umm.. sketch is depicting flying ships?
  • Shallan, sorry, Veil POV again.. I want Jasnah.. :-/
  • Veil goes full Sherlock Holmes here... not only remembering details, but adding personalities and their desires and what not.. but she does miss a person gathering info, Ialai's?
  • Vathah learns quickly.. becoming a squire? or just his own skill..
  • the library again.. hope we get some info.. May Aladar mentioned after long time..Adrotagia is here too.. Mr. T/Adolin/Elhokar back?
  • 'courting Janala soon before' is the grammar right here or a typo? .. wasn't she the one with Graves, part of Diagram?
  • Shallan so far in to changing personalities that she's thinking about getting persona for scholarship before realizing she is one already.. bad, very bad..pattern humming too - to concern?
  • Renarin comes.. Dalinar told he could, just listen maybe.. and Jasnah welcomes him..
  • we get to know that trying to infuse gemstone pillar failed so far.. did any KR try to infuse? like they did operating the oathgates?
  • Pattern contributes by asking a question too :D
  • Renarin noticed pattern is visible only now? anyway big point is he and Shallan consider Urithiru to be one big fabiral
  • 'it bees a city' what does 'bees' mean here?
  • and Dalinar shows up as a support for Renarin..

a revelation

  • Moash again, chapter icon is masked on bridge four symbol.. didn't notice it last chapter
  • wow, all the way to Revolar... voidbringers attacked him and his pals knowing they had shards? Ulim sure was very interested in the shards..
  • Moash being here gives us info on Revolar too.. well well, now I wonder if he's the one who'll deliver the part two ending awesomeness..
  • parshmen treating humans as slaves.. but offered their choice of work.. and lighteyes being lighteyes, have found ways to maintain their structure even here, but it does give Moash some self revelations.. and takes up hard labor offer.. which totally was what he needed to do for future awesomeness

when the dream dies

  • yay, if Moash technically doesn't count.. I get Skar POV right.. who's next? Hobber?
  • Skar, Dabbid and Rlain the only ones left who haven't managed to breathe stormlight.. the Lopen is walking around on the ceilings :D
  • Kal as usual late.. huh? may be because of other pressing matters like the KR meetings? and what's the progress with Lyn.. maybe she'll get a POV too
  • Kal finally arrives, with many potential recruits.. they've figured that using oathgates for both sets (one down and the other up) is efficient in terms of stormlight.. bridge runs started again for gemheart harvesting..
  • and Skar joins Lyn, who is also feeling left out..
  • when you give up? that's when the dream dies - I really need to follow this
  • and just like that Lyn succeeds in drawing stormlight? after a speech from Skar.. or may be the words really affected her..
  • he realizes he's helped two so far like that.. Rock last time.. may be something special in store for Skar :D nope, he succeeds himself talking to Rock..

so much is lost

  • finally Jasnah POV.. Ivory is full sized besides her, reading Taln's words
  • she had backed up her notes.. encrypted of course.. now being written to her back via spanreeds
  • childhood illness.. nobody else seemed to remember, for all it had done to her.. may be we'll get that details only in her flashback book?
  • basically all higher sprens have something bad to say about the others?
  • hmm Jasnah knows what caused Recreance.. told to her by Wit.. Ivory tells her not to spill the secret..
  • Dalinar trying hard to unify Roshar, but his own handful of KRs aren't working with one another, even their spren don't like each other..

rhythm of work

  • parshmen are marching towards Kholinar.. Moash finds pulling sledges easier than having to carry bridges.. feels good to be told what to do
  • 10s of thousands of parshmen armed with spears and axes.. one group of parshmen treated poorly, forced to do work like human slaves.. the group Kal was traveling with I suppose.. poor Kal, wonder what he'll do if he comes to know
  • more than 4 weeks of march to Kholinar.. guess the wagons were enough to hide in the storms.. okay they used villages in the way
  • and Moash rebels to prevent the parshmen crew from beatings.. and they let it be.. wonder what'll they think of another human trying to help them - thank him or curse him that he might bring even more trouble later on

born unto light

  • uh oh, Dalinar using moss too.. been hurting ppl in brawls, apparently no batles means no Thrill and that is problematic like addicts
  • Adolin is born unto light
  • Gavilar asks Dalinar to defend the borders

shash thirty seven

  • epigraph - shards are experimenting something and explicitly training to dislike Hoid... hmmm
  • Kal and squires are giving a flying lift to Dalinar, Navani, Elhokar and ardents.. so they are back from trip to Vedenar
  • but we haven't seen Mr. T, Ialai, Amaram, etc for a while now.. something must be brewing behind the scenes.. and Sadeas murder seems all but forgotten
  • 10 weeks since battle at Narak.. Dalinar and Kadash have theological discussion again.. I thought spanreeds were going off all over, guess I misread
  • Dalinar investigates the room Taln stayed, finds the poison darts.. hands over ardent records and darts to Navani..
  • asks Kal to go open the oathgate for Fen
  • I am having trouble understanding what Kal means by flying in front of storm.. highstorm blows from east to west.. he has to travel from west to east.. is it meaning he'll be going over the highstorm as it passes away and below him?

full circle

  • another Moash, his arc seems to culminate into something big, guess he is the one delivering awesome end to part two - he'll side with parshmen? doubt he'll turn KR, not enough time..or turn the parshmen against the Fused? .. Venli and co have joined? what about Eshonai, dead for sure but will do something from other realms?
  • interesting, the floating Fused last longer than Kal could.. or don't need dark stormlight at all for hovering
  • Moash mentions killing a Fused, Sah stared slack-jawed.. they are about a day from Kholinar
  • Moash is to work the lumberyards, building siege equipment.. and then used as fodder during assault.. much like bridgemen in Sadeas's camp
  • hmm, POV changes to Shallan, been a while..another letter from Mraize.. telling Ishnah's services could be used..though she's overstated her abilities
  • Shallan has managed to attach illusion to a sphere.. which will continue to function on stormlight without her/pattern
  • Kal has Shallan to accompany him to open oathgate at Thaylen City.. bring it on.. but where is Adolin.. no mention
  • Shallan shows off her lightweaving skills to Elhokar, wants him to recruit her for the Kholinar mission.. she even turns into parshwoman..
  • last intel from Kholinar - riots, darkness, spren taking form and hurting people

after his father

  • wow, 4 long years to secure lands against Herdaz... what kind of opposition had Herdaz and presumably Reshi managed to put against Dalinar? they had shards? or the area to cover was simply too big?
  • strange idea.. plate made from cremlings? or something like larkin?
  • Evi has come with Adolin/Renarin to warcamps.. Adolin already talking like a soldier and Renarin displaying his quiet self

such a twisted cut

  • epigraph - is Hoid replying back?
  • the path unmade took to escape has lead them to exit in the mountains.. foothills of Tu Fallia..
  • Jasnah having group chat via spanreeds.. right, I had forgotten that term - Veristitalians.. and I'll continue to think of Veritaserum from HP
  • one of them has news about Nale and Lift while the other has spotted Axies somewhere.. Jasnah has drawings of true faces of Heralds (got from Wit?)
  • Jasnah beginning to show interest in behavior of parshmen following the everstorm.. perhaps she'll begin to agree with Kal's views
  • hmm, looks like Ellista and Urv were commissioned by Veristitalians... not Mr. T as I thought
  • oh, Navani and Shallan discussing wedding preparations eh.. that sure means something gonna come disrupting in near future :P
  • Renarin mumbling.. something about coming from in here..somewhere in this room.. pillar I guess.. which I further guess has info stored, Ishar probably succeeded in that quest
  • Jasnah goes to Shallan, presumably to ask her to take snapshot of Renarin and draw..
  • but interrupted by Amaram's arrival.. showtime?
  • Jasnah sure doesn't want to do anything with Amaram.. apparently Gavilar had wished them to be close years before..
  • wow, Amaram really has something for her.. so riled up to call her a godless whore, prepares to summon Blade.. but of course Jasnah can do it before him :P
  • I think it was merely plan of Ialai and Amaram, knowing full well how Jasnah would react.. I hate such backstabbings
  • Shallan is so overwhelmed, she is clapping and gleeful..blabbers her mission with Elhokar..
  • Jasnah asks Shallan to draw Renarin/Kal's sprens for scholarly reasons (assuming they'll show themselves to her or she could merely take snapshots?)
  • meanwhile, Renarin dear has figured out something.. the tiles on the walls could be opened by tapping a specific one..
  • they find a ruby, cut into strange shape with holes drilled in it.. Navani obviously wonders if it is a fabrial..
  • well I was both right and wrong.. info stored here but not in pillar.. but gems like these that form a pattern when stormlight leaks.. and of course Pattern was the one who spotted :D
  • did Jasnah follow up Shallan's suggestion to look into shadesmar?

an ancient singer's name

  • epigraph, okay, looks like another shard is replying to Hoid. .chapter title is interesting..
  • Moash has come to know Kal had been with Sah/Khen group.. the voidbringers intend to assault Kholinar within weeks
  • just wondering why Fused haven't tried to take Kholinar by themselves.. they have dark stormlight.. they have got shards.. why all this preparation?
  • flying type Fused seem to be in incharge of other Fused too.. Moash taken to a Fused name Leshwi..someone in charge.. all 3 colors
  • apparently Moash is one of parshmen used for names too - ancient singer's name..Leshwi tells she is one of the Fused who is sane
  • hmm Leshwi is the one Moash had killed :P now reborn again.. she keeps mentioning passion... isn't Passions one of the swearing ppl of some region (Thaylen?) use?
  • Moash is still burning to get vengeance for his grandparents death.. some sort of voice seems to be speaking to him internally.. and Leshwi is gonna tell him why they are fighting.. off screen of course
  • half an hour later, Moash walks alone, freed.. Moash decides to teach the parshmen group how to handle spears..

alone together

  • epigraph - Sazed?
  • back to bridge four POV, and it is Rlain.. yet again slips off mind that he is there.. just like in-world..
  • 10 recruits including Lyn and 4 scouts and a lighteyed archer have turned squires.. now training with Peet
  • more caravans have been raided by Fused.. squires lose powers within hour/two of Kal leaving.. promixity needed - about 50 miles, fading around 30 miles
  • they speak about their issues, Rock says they can all be alone together.. Kal asks Rlain to tell how he feels.. he answers that he can try

always with you

  • Dalinar has brought Navani and Jasnah into visions without needing highstorm.. does Ivory come too in the vision?
  • it is the Recreance scene where KRs break oaths.. Jasnah says it could be false desolation.. an account claims some voidbringers survived Aharietiam.. thinks this could be clash with parshmen before they were enslaved
  • hmm, Gawx has been brought too.. will Lift come too? please..
  • vision ends but then it doesn't... drum rolls.. Odium has come to visit.. seemingly friendly and jovial and smiling... seems like Shin..carries a golden scepter..wears a golden crown.. old with ancient eyes, bone-white hair..
  • been always with Dalinar.. connected via Thrill?

passion

  • stormfather is whimpering, distant
  • Odium says he'll kill Cultivation too, who has hidden herself somewhere.. and Odium is too shackled
  • well well well, Odium will go if Dalinar releases Odium, if done by Intent - I feel like Dalinar will do so some day...
  • Odium says he is best described as Passion - lust, joy, hatred, anger, exultation, glory, vice.. very thing that makes men 'men'
  • Honor cared only for bonds, not meaning of bonds/oaths.. Cultivation only wants transformation, growth.. but only Odium understands and cares pain of men
  • Odium says Dalinar has met Cultivation, took away the memory though.. won't accept champions.. because he knows Dalinar will free Odium..
  • Dalinar tells he has seen Odium and it was a mistake of him to show himself.. then Odium shows him something of his true self.. before vanishing, Odium cuts off speaking to Dalinar.. frowned, spinning.. searched the rocks..
  • wow, Lift is here.. she's the one cause for Odium's frowning? she says Odium was 'extra creepy'.. compared to that, Dalinar is nothing.. and offers to come to Urithiru..
  • end of part two.. no idea when this part was going to end, I simply thought something else will be awesome ending.. and now I feel underwhelmed by Odium interactions... seriously it is weird to feel much about him.. it requires on-screen time and details.. Ialai/Amaram/Mraize/etc feel more immediately threatening than Odium.. haven't been able to imagine what it took for other shards to be splintered.. and what about Adonalsium shattering.. just events without proper foundation to feel their significance and associated emotions..

interlude 4 - Kaza

  • on a ship, plunge into storm (not matching either highstorm/everstorm) and come out safely.. going towards nothern section of Aimia to plunder riches on hidden islands..
  • Kaza came because of another rumor, cure for her condition.. she's a soulcaster.. each use is detrimental to body and disfigures too.. slowly becoming smoke.. still few years left until soulcasting killed her
  • captain steers toward small island, rock of secrets/void's playground/akinah... entire island ringed with wall, about 40ft tall..resembling spearheads.. soulcast..
  • Kaza has begun to see cognitive realm and sprens that live there.. turns tips of stone spears put there to sink ships to smoke..
  • some go back for some reason... one says gemstones from generations of greatshells will be here
  • Aimians had known about soulcasters.. to get the devices, one would come to akinah.. Kaza thinks she'll find a secret here to avoid death due to soulcasting
  • everybody starts to lose consciousness - something in the food put by the cook, who'd looked like Reshi
  • Kaza rows alone and later checks to find nobody breathing.. feels drowsy herself and sleeps.. awakes to strangely shaped small cremling scuttling.. larkin
  • on the way to city crawling, notices gemstone of dead greatshell..collapses near perimeter of rock formations.. the cook drugged the food.. a guardian, charged with preventing men from discovering this place again
  • Kaza asks if the gemstones are something else, something more.. cook doesn't grant dying demand.. as there are those who could pull secrets from soul..cost would be ends of worlds..
  • the cook of course is Aimian.. Kaza dies her own way, soulcasts rock beneath her and goes with it..

interlude 5 - Taravangian

  • Mr. T is storming genius one fine day in Urithiru
  • Adrotagia and Malata growing in companionship.. Malata was lesser Diagram member now in upper echelons, event predicted by Diagram..Dustbringers most likely to accept their cause..
  • Mr. T feels energized, awake, brilliant.. Dukar says he's almost to danger line, but Mr. T says he feels perfect..he can interact, make policy decisions, need no restrictions.. others agree.. surely some disaster gonna follow :D
  • wants copy of Diagram, music and no interruption.. cuts up pages to arrange and analyze in different perspectives
  • calculations about Urithiru provides fine distraction.. but soon goes back to Diagram..
  • Dalinar would oppose his attempts to take over Aladar - assassination attempt, but Szeth failed
  • there are contingencies.. Dalinar would attempt to unite the world - Mr. T decodes what to do for that..Diagram hadn't seen effect of Renarin..
  • after finishing notations, asks for copu of surgeon's words upon his birth.. Adrotagia brings them but confronts that Mr. T purposefully botched the test..
  • Mr. T avoids and asks if she knows about stormlight growth.. from the Urithiru calculations, determines if food grew naturally it cannot provide to self sustain the entire tower
  • she pushes out Adrotagia saying he wont make policy decisions and wont order murdering groups of melodic children
  • gets back to work again on Blackthorn.. wonders if he should go for another assassination..
  • surgeon's words: cord wrapped around Mr. T's neck.. queen will know best course, but regret to inform that when he lives, might have diminished capacity..
  • that didn't happen but reputation persisted.. almost has answers for Dalinar.. shouldn't kill him..support coalition, then force him to step down so that Mr. T himself can be head of monarchs.. but that conclusion by changing original Diagram itself..
  • push Blackthorn so hard that he collapses.. will need secrets to use against him.. Mr. T says they can use Malata's spren to spy..
  • with Mr. T as head, they'll negotiate with Odium.. who'll be bound by agreement made by laws of spren and gods.. but but Mr. T, I think you need to be bondsmith as well
  • Diagram is clear, cannot beat Odium.. hence the alternate negotiations.. save whatever they can..

interlude 6 - this one is mine

  • 9 listeners out of surviving 2000 selected for something.. bonding with unmade? anyway, they'd been promised something great
  • they're in stormform, so perhaps will become Fused? Ulim insists upon embracing, welcoming, wanting.. or powers will not able to take place in their gemhearts (Intent stuff?)
  • don't fully understand.. Venli transformed, but not like the others, who are very tall now.. they say Odium rides the very winds like enemy(Honor?) once did.. take strange names.. say this feels good
  • Ulim says bad bad seeing Venli.. calls the new forms grand of the Fused.. Venli now has just another form of power.. bond with lesser voidspren.. above listeners but big step below Fused
  • grand Fused say Ulim's service here was grand but displeased with Ulim using human ways and language..
  • apparently Venli has been preserved for a purpose by Odium himself.. she sits down and while waiting notices the comet-spren again..instinctively knows it'll be destroyed, so hides it from their attention.. (so, as speculated by others, that spren is something of Eshonai?) they say they have travel to Alethela (Alethkar)..
  • so that'll be the ending of this book? big fight in Kholinar - just like first two books, clash between listeners and humans.. getting repetitive like desolations
  • rereading the voice Venli heard.. was that Odium? - ancient, paternal, kind, blah blah voice.. like Dalinar's vision

burdens

  • yay, Adolin and Kal POV in part-3.. hopefully lot of Syl too
  • epigraphs - the info saved in gems in the library..
  • Dalinar refers to Odium as dark god.. and my first thought is that Sanderson will prove it wrong in some way :P and we have Ruin as example too.. are we going to see Odium mingling with Honor's splinters, may be put in Cultivation too :D
  • visions suspended for now.. Rial is among guards again...just a guard who is interesting (I'd prefer this) in his ways or someone impersonating? ghostbloods/Ialai/world-hopper/etc or even Wit.. does the Diagram incorporate for these organizations/world-hoppers/etc? how about Ialai now assassinating Dalinar to put Mr. T's solution go to pieces? :D
  • they think one could use the oathgates to travel between any city without coming to Urithiru, but don't know how
  • Kal/Shallan emerged (from Thaylen) after Malata uses the blade to engage the oathgate.. they'd transferred only control building, not entire platform.. so it reduces stormlight needed - interesting Kal-Shallan stuff happening off screen :-/
  • Kal says Fen is prepared to meet Dalinar..Shallan goes to Urithiru..Dalinar asks Kal if the highstorm flight went well.. no probs, says Kal.. so next storm, Kal and co will go to Kholinar..
  • Dalinar accepts something strange is going on.. Kal had said parshmen gathering moving towards Kholinar.. they have Fused too.. so isn't it very great risk to send just small team there?
  • Kal has been given some land, now that he is shardbearer..after talking he goes to Urithiru too
  • Dalinar, Navani, Mr. T, Adrotagia and Malata go to Thaylen City..which is all broken courtesy everstorm..wooden docks completely ruined.. Kharbranth not ruined like this due to slightly southern orientation..

bondsmith

  • hmm epigraphs are accounts of KRs.. personal details.. guess we'll have wait longer for details that might help current KRs
  • the variations in everstorm (no winds or no rains etc) a purposeful ploy by Odium? or just the needs of Fused and stuff
  • Dalinar has an idea, wants to give a lesson, a display.. those words bring dredge up something from painful past.. and all this memory loss stuff - only now I am connecting it with Mat.. smh.. nightwatcher is Aelfinn/Eelfinn.. desolations are epochs and so on..
  • excellent.. Navani support cast for Dalinar's act :D Dalinar uses the adv that he could heal to put up a show.. reminded of Lord Ruler.. but in retrospect, Dalinar feels ashamed
  • hmm, he hears a different voice - 'Unite us. Please'.. chunks of stone in pain..spren of temple..okay, I think this will about Dalinar's second surge.. feels a bit like soulcasting too.. involving spren.. cognitive realm?
  • Dalinar replies to Navani that he 'listened'... and sends for Renarin.. for mass healing? ;) also puts the temple tour in beginning as important than just tour..
  • wish Lift was there too, she'd have so loved it...
  • and of course Fen agrees to join

winds and oaths

  • of all days in the month, today had to be power shut down - so while I could continue reading on mobile, no notes.. going to add summaries/what-i-can-remember for those chapters.. I also noticed that I haven't even crossed 50% yet.. how big is this book?
  • Kal, Shallan, Adolin, Elhokar along with Skar, Drehy, Vathah, Red and Ishnah are going to Kholinar, above the storms as I thought
  • Ishnah rhymes with Vivenna?
  • Shallan really likes flying.. Adolin doesn't..

nightmare made manifest

  • Shallan and co manage to get inside, despite stopped by guards courtesy Fused raid.. Kal got really bad illusion on him :P
  • so, Unmade is here.. that's why stormfather couldn't connect anyone with Dalinar..
  • in that case, why do parshmen need to prepare for attacking Kholinar? or communication issue between Unmade and Fused?
  • some types of spren have been corrupted, Syl says they from Odium... there is a group Cult of Moments based on them..
  • of course Adolin knew a tailor he could trust

research

  • really like Shallan's misadventures to capture the corrupted spren.. Shallan chapters are nice without Jasnah's shadow
  • any use of fabrial brings screaming yellow spren followed by Fused raid
  • whoever goes to visit the Queen got killed..
  • Shallan reveals to her group that she is indeed Veil

within the mirror

  • in which Shallan carries letter from Elhokar to palace, gets stabbed but escapes
  • floor-to-ceiling mirror - something in it(Unmade I suppose) looks at Shallan with sudden and surprised motion.. looked like shadow of person with white spots for eyes
  • Kal even manages to smile and try a witty reply

binder of gods

  • Dalinar finally finds good use for Jezrien's honorblade.. gives it to bridge four to use it for their practice as Kal is away.. Dalinar also realizes it'll help heal a wounded person
  • stormlight doesn't come from stormfather, but the storms themselves.. Honor's power..
  • Dalinar says he has meeting with Gawx, 1000 miles away.. doesn't look that far when seen from map..
  • Dalinar goes alone to Azimir, taking 3 essays to persuade the Azish.. and Navani's lunchbox, but of course Lift had to steal that :P

verdict

  • stormfather says it was Dalinar himself, able to speak different languages in the visions.. then what about Fen, Gawx, Navani, Jasnah?
  • anyway, using Spiritual Adhesion, Dalinar can now speak Azish.. I suppose this plays a role for worldhoppers too
  • the wooden structures remind Dalinar of Rathalas/Rift and when he goes back to Urithiru, entire memory has re-surfaced.. similar to first time he could hear Evi again - Navani again calling for healers.. but but but Dalinar can use stormlight to heal :P
  • somewhere, Dalinar with help of stormfather realizes Tezim is Ishar..
  • Lift has stolen Dalinar's food, but near the end shares some nuts..tells she's Edgedancer..and notices Dalinar 'smells' of nightwatcher
  • Azish have accepted to come to Urithiru, along with whichever neighbouring countries is interested or able to come
  • Dalinar behavior wasn't what they expected.. thought he'd be an animal, half-man creature of war and blood.. and that triggers Rift memories

strategist

  • in which Dalinar and Adolin have good conversation about wars and stuff
  • Evi breaks down and argues when Dalinar says he doubts they'll settle back in Kholinar again..
  • Dalinar agrees to try to stay a year there, but only after Rift resolution
  • Dalinar also doesn't bother about Renarin as he won't be a soldier..

Mishim

  • nice sketch about altered sprens.. but what's that about mistborn like clothing man carrying spear like weapon at least twice his height? hovering Fused?
  • in which Elhokar has come up with a plan
  • Veil goes info gathering and hears Wit telling story (how Natan people got blue skin, the moons of course bring KKC to mind :D)... and again Sanderson shines in such stories :)
  • Shallan is sure amazed by Wit's lightweaving thing... Hoid is missing his flute.. why Kal, why did you forget it!

aim for the sun

  • in which we get to see Shallan trying to match wit with Wit
  • Shallan gets a glimpse of Hoid's age..
  • Hoid made a vow when he was young - he'd always be there when he was needed.. there turned out to be anywhere :D.. and not always what he's supposed to do..
  • Shallan informs Sadeas is dead.. but Wit brought the name first.. intentionally?
  • Shallan tells she wants to use power, save/change the world etc.. Hoid is full of insightful advice.. be wise, power is burden, learn why she has power etc
  • Wit can't make the oathgate work - that fabrial spren won't obey him..
  • suggest Food as a way to infiltrate Cult
  • Wit leaves, says Shallan is not why he's here..Pattern says 'Wit feels like one of us'

free meal, no strings

  • Kal's usage of lashing brings the screaming sprens and Fused.. but Shallan's lightweaving doesn't... looks like the unmade has to be tackled by windrunner this time
  • Adolin, Kal, Elhokar, Skar and Drehy go to lighteyes party for info gathering.. Shallan uses sphere attached illusions on them.. but for some reason, Kal's illusion to cover his slave brands comes off
  • Kal again accepts that you cannot but like Adolin.. self introspection that since seeing his family alive, he's been feeling better.. but on bad days, he feels like he's always been in darkness and would be so...
  • Adolin again shows his war learnings.. main takeaway being Kal should learn to use other weapons than spear too..
  • Kal tries to get info on Wall Guards.. gets caught and they invite him to have free food.. and no strings attached.. interested in his shash story

highmarshal azure

  • in which Kal feels at home, barracks.. all lighteyed soldiers.. which took a while for Kal to notice
  • Beard character looks interesting, hope we get more info on him..
  • highmarshal azure turns out be a 'she'.. Kal is still not used to woman wielding sword
  • hints given that Azure is likely KR..
  • Azure shows him parshmen in the distance and tells a man's past doesn't matter in face of voidbringers

a sign of humanity

  • Dalinar at the Rift, he is coming from west, Adolin sent back to Kholinar, Sadeas coming from east
  • Evi is outwardly perfect, but often weeping.. she thinks their spat boded ill for their relationship.. Dalinar feels crushed..
  • Evi has noticed Dalinar's eyes when he feels the Thrill - horrible, terrifying nothingness.. creature with no heart, feasting upon souls to fill that void, dragging painspren in his wake.. it haunts Evi
  • well, that exchange with Tanalan and what followed.. very intriguing.. I guess Sanderson is setting up to deliver a nice twist

rockfall

  • Shallan and co have come to a stone mansion..rockfall.. waterfall soulcasted as crystal..another turned to wood..
  • they've come to steal from mansion's larder.. Shallan overdoes impersonating the mansion's Brightness Nananav.. but manages to stop before doing something very bad.. Veil says Shallan's head is a frightening place... maybe she will really do something bad/stupid soon enough
  • pattern happily plays his part in confusing others..
  • before escaping, their theft had been discovered.. so they try to run.. but chulls go at chull speed :P
  • Shallan adopts Nananav's face again, even creating illusionary boiling sprens, real Nananav screams and flees.. a guard hits Shallan in the head with crossbow bolt..
  • her own team members get very afraid of Shallan... she heals but bolt gets stuck.. so blacks out when it is pulled off.. crazy Shallan.. wonder what Adolin would say is he'd seen this :D
  • Wit left a note where they had food, still trying to get contact.. so Shallan now thinks may be she doesn't need to wait for Wit.. am sure this will end nicely :D :(
  • she asks the urchin (Grund) she'd asked for info before to know who could do with some food.. she's doing it to get attention of the Cult.. at the same time trying to help the starving ppl
  • another scene where Lift would've been awesome to have..

telling which stories

  • Beard is telling about his past, perhaps tall tales, perhaps the truth.. or mix of both
  • interesting to see Kal's own kinda thinking thrown at him and he's trying to defend, because Adolin is nice :D
  • hmm Azure might be carrying honorblade instead of being KR.. I initially thought she was Edgedancer and grew the food..
  • well, Taln did come to Kholinar first.. and the blade was switched somewhere.. perhaps Azure does have that one?
  • Fused raid but Kal's company didn't engage.. will Kal be torn between acting a guard and being a KR? lead to next Ideal?

swiftspren

  • Shallan's been dubbed swiftspren, as he robs rich people and distributes the food to needy
  • hmm... pattern sounded drowsy.. he asks Shallan to remember her Ideal, the truth she spoke
  • and so many times it is mentioned that Shallan zones out and doesn't remember how long she did that.. what is going on.. sleepy?
  • Cult is passing by.. Shallan does something to act like swiftspren.. using the spren she'd noticed around skyeels (and Santhid IIRC)
  • 'Shallan, I'm not your enemy' is that Odium?
  • she tells the Cult to stop dancing and be men/women again..uses light tricks and they flee.. some throwing the costumes..
  • Shallan trembles, she'd become one of them so easily when she acted as swiftspren trying to know the Cult
  • sees Wit performing on the way to their place.. I think why Wit had to be here may be just to tell stories?
  • talks to Elhokar.. sketches him, kneeling-beaten-ragged but chin raised..
  • Ishnah, who was wearing Veil disguise and distributing food, gets a note - invitation for revel with Cult - day of everstorm..

only red

  • I am having SA dreams, last night had one where Shallan was trying to get a feel for Wit's personality to use as illusion, doesn't go well for her :D and somehow, within dream wondered that Wit can't hurt her in physical realm, so he hurt her in cognitive realm?
  • there were others too.. I had seen this chapter title before sleeping, dreamt something like Dalinar goes and butchers the ppl in wagon pointed out by Tanalan and in the heat of Thrill kills Evi too when she comes to meet him, witnessed by Kadash
  • well, it is an ambush.. but he does kill them all in Thrill.. going back he sees armies of red mist from corner of his vision - glimpse into Damnation?
  • others thought he was dead, Dalinar plans to kill everybody in Rift.. Sadeas encourages it.. somehow I think he did play a role in the ambush :P

an animal

  • an envoy is leaving Rift, flag of truce.. Dalinar orders them killed
  • Amaram is there too..
  • Dalinar wants to stop at one point but Sadeas has ensured there won't be any escape
  • Evi had gone to broker a peace deal.. but Dalinar killed the envoy.. Evi was still inside and now she's dead too

stormshelter

  • epigraph hints enslaving of parshmen that followed.. parsh were continuing war with zeal, even without their masters from Damnation
  • Kal finds shelter from a everstorm.. Shallan and Adolin (as Khal) are sitting in a booth..
  • I am wondering if Azure is edgedancer Herald herself.. she was one of the endpages Heralds.. or if it is soulcasting, then Ash?
  • Syl is humming softly, way of ignoring everstorm sounds
  • Shallan has finally got a copy of Mythica - about unmades.. aww, Kal likes them both but not together :D :D :D
  • she thinks there are two unmades - Sja-anat, Taker of Secrets, corrupts other spren... Ashertmarn, Heart of the Revel, leads ppl to indulge in excess
  • odd cremling spotted.. Kal is disgusted.. if only he knew :P
  • yay, Vathah accidentally draws in stormlight, Shallan's squires are here :)

the revel

  • epigraph - scholar Radiants want to deny enemy the supply of Voidlight
  • more and more Shallan wants to be Veil always.. she's allowed up the oathgate for revelation
  • meanwhile Kal going for dinner with Azure.. oh Syl, don't be so quiet.. where are your wordy quips?
  • rotund man guiding Veil.. the ardent we saw in Kholinar interlude in WoR?
  • she again hears the voices to give up and embrace the end
  • she leaves Veil attached to sphere to escape the guide.. pattern caused diversion by imitating the voices to revel..
  • Kal comments on Azure's casual handling of blade and other odd things.. Azure says her arrival when needed should be thanked, not questioned.. sounds like Herald :P
  • Azure asks if Kal came here chasing her..drums sound in the distance.. To arms, Kal shouts.. just another raid or full on attack, just after an everstorm?
  • Shallan(as Kishi) has moved a ring inward on the oathgate platform.. again about to lose herself but pattern hums and she becomes Veil..she thinks the place is doing strange things, even for her
  • overgrown mass over the control building, like midnight mother had enveloped gemstone pillar in Urithiru
  • sound and rhythm of the dark mass like Heart.. hence the name.. her shadow points towards moonlight..
  • again a voice speaking to Shallan.. not her enemy.. heart is trap, take caution..
  • hears the drums informing voidbringer attack.. she escapes and jumps off the oathgate

echoes of thunder

  • Azure uses 'white on black' - Nalthis worldhopper!!!! Vivenna at last? using honorblade?
  • striking towards the heart kills the Fused.. Syl had sensed something and informed Kal..
  • still not getting the point of Fused raids.. think something more is the reason..
  • Azure's cloak held oddly in hand.. awakened? :P shardblade glittered, long and silvery
  • finally, entire enemy army is spotted in the distance, will attack before next highstorm.. what's Moash been upto..
  • Kal reveals himself, came on orders of Elhokar and Dalinar.. asks Azure to start talking.. she smiles and asks to come with her

oblivious

  • epigraph - unmade Ba-Ado-Mishram has somehow Connected with parsh ppl, provides voidlight and facilitates forms of power.. KR strike team planning to imprison her
  • Veil wants to distribute food instead of having time alone.. but Grund ain't there in usual place..comes as she's about to leave.. scowling instead of usual happiness.. she leaves, pattern and Veil think he's lying..
  • she changes and goes back.. hears Grund talking with others.. Grund and others given food by Veil were beaten
  • this seems like one of the things Wit warned her about..

ithi and her sister

  • epigraph - denying forms of power for parsh, Melishi is confident, Naze-daughter-Kuzodo warns of unintended side effects
  • Kal asks Azure to show about the food arrangement... there are secret ways..
  • many times strata mentioned about Kholinar.. being similar to Urithiru... guess they were all done similarly.. Kabsal was right :P
  • soulcaster (ithi and her sister) down here.. changing stone to grain.. walls covered by reflective metal plates.. soon after strangeness at palace began, Wit came with sheets of metal.. avoids the screamers, but can't use spanreeds..
  • Kal tells about the oathgate

the girl who stood up

  • chapter title is interesting.. reference to part-one, Shallan going to power up?
  • huddled somewhere, Shallan cycled 100 faces..stormlight over
  • in the darkness, her mind goes over past.. father/mother/tyn/kabsal/yalb/coachman/grund.. accepts to herself that Veil had been a lie, not helped these ppl.. only made worse
  • Wit comes with light/sphere.. tells she tried..mostly failed but thats life..
  • Wit brings up 'the girl who looked up'.. tries to animate, fails(purposefully?) and asks Shallan for help, giving bag of spheres..
  • Shallan brings up the illusions she did before in Urithiru.. but more than done before.. Wit changes it, saying there was no light those days..
  • as the story progresses, she asks Wit what to do.. she's said the Words and can't ignore it anymore..
  • the girl brought light and storms..ppl suffered but each storm brought light renewed..ppl won't go back as they could now see..
  • Wit makes two identical versions of Shallan..one collapses.. the other stays because of forgiveness, for herself..Wit tells her to accept her being her, not been taken over by others who look more appealing
  • Wit says he knows certain things, Shallan can do it.. should find balance, accept pain but don't accept that she deserved it.. so no more looking slyly at Kal? :D
  • pattern hums in appreciation, Wit leaves
  • Shallan now goes out, wearing Veil's clothing.. and accepts..
  • Adolin been worried and now happy to see her.. even compliments the dress and gives tips
  • they hear some sort of parade.. storming bridgeboy has brought the Wall Guard, army to attack the palace..

crimson to break

  • epigraph - elsecaller burdened to protect ruby nicknamed Honor's Drop... more things to remember :D hope it doesn't turn out like locked room in department of mysteries
  • Adolin POV finally..thinks about attacking palace he'd known for long.. summons his blade and talks to it as usual, doesn't have mother's necklace.. lost like Kal's flute?
  • still doesn't know whether to be ashamed/proud, but had felt it very satisfying to shove a knife in Sadeas's eye
  • other lighteyes have joined too, Adolin/Elhokar had revealed themselves.. they are going through the plan but drums signal that city's under attack
  • I feel like they'll try to flee to Urithiru than fight back the voidbringers.. take whomever they can from the city as well.. but then again, Jasnah does fight a thunderclast as per cover.. gonna happen now?
  • Elhokar hands a spanreed to adrent from Azure's guards.. asks him to use it despite the risks.. to contact Urithiru and get forces ready..
  • Beard recounting how Kal flew like an arrow and was glowing when he saved his life and killed the Fused
  • and thunderclast is here..throws a horse size boulder at them which Kal deflects back.. losing stormlight in the process..
  • then Kal, Skar, Drehy and Shallan fly to meet the Fused.. ask Adolin to get inside palace and meet them in eastern gallery
  • when Azure stabs, eyes don't burn but skin does go strange ashen grey.. is it Nightblood kinda blade without his special effects? honorblade ruled out I suppose..
  • she uses the 'crimson to break' phrase about the shield wall formed in corridor leading to gallery
  • Adolin hears the voice too - passion, sweet passion.. hasn't mentioned Thrill yet
  • Kal, Skar, Drehy come to gallery.. Kal glowing powerfully, Syl as 12ft metallic spear..
  • Shallan at the entrance to Sunwalk.. illusion of Kal/Skar/Drehy dead bodies, made the Fused to leave them and go to fighting at city wall
  • Kal wants to go with Elhokar to find out about queen and heir.. (will they be worth saving? I'm guessing they've been corrupted)
  • others to get Shallan to the unmade.. which one, mirror or heart? ok, both :D
  • Adolin still thinks they can save the city.. where is Moash?
  • they fight their way to the heart.. where is the mirror?

the one you can save

  • epigraph - seems like Feverstone Keep seen in Dalinar's vision is in/near Rall Elorim.. IIRC also known as city of lightning.. KRs don't know why enemy is making a push there
  • yay, finally Syl's quips.. Kal asks her to check for ambush, she replies - Yessir, commander sir, Radiant sir :D :D.. he notices Beard and his squad.. they're going to become his squires too? ;)
  • queen is singing, in a room alone.. what has she become? Kal feels he knows the tune..
  • Shallan tries same trick as before.. touches the heart.. which tries to sweep her away
  • queen looks away from mirror and smiles seeing Elhokar..when asked, says heir Gav is playing with friends.. Kal goes to check..
  • Syl has found something behind dressing screen..2-3 yr old child huddled behind.. corrupted spren attacking him.. Kal reacts immediately with rage, kills one with Syl..others go away in panic..Syl groans, Kal says the thing deserved it..Syl huddles, wrapping arms around herself
  • queen says Elhokar is a fool.. she's found the secret, ancient spren which you can bond.. I guess she's bonded already.. yep.. eyes glows deep red
  • when asked by Kal, says Yelig-nar(another unmade?) serves her.. Ashertmarn has no will..
  • Kal tells Elhokar to go, be a hero to one he can save(meaning the son.. hope he isn't corrupted in some way)
  • Aesudan has harnessed Yelig-nar's power.. something twists around here, a black smoke.. shouts for her soldiers to attack
  • the heart assaults Shallan to give in.. Shallan transforms with each heartbeat..1000 ppl in a moment..but which one was her?
  • 'All of them' a new voice.. Shallan thinks it is Wit..asks for help.. hears to make Shallan so strong, others must bow..
  • she replies she doesn't know if she can.. the darkness thrummed, surged and withdrew.. huh.. anticlimax
  • she looks in mirror, Sja-anat mouths that she is not her enemy..
  • Kal tries the trick to converge arrows safely away from them, succeeds partially.. growls and bursts alight with stormlight.. the glow makes the queen's soldiers shy back, much like Shallan vs midnight's minions
  • on the retreat, he hears parshendi songs..Kal lashes to save his men, many fall to parshendi.. Kal lands in front of his men.. and before he could begin his work of death, he sees Sah.. so Moash at last?
  • Sja-anat tells Ashertmarn fled on purpose.. it is a trap..Sja was compelled to touch spren of this device..won't function as Shallan wishes..
  • Sah and Khen also don't want to fight Kal.. then it all turns mad.. everybody fighting while Kal is confused.. feel an ideal coming up ;)
  • he bellows to them to stop killing each other.. Sah rams Beard with spear.. Noro runs through Jali..queen's guard manages to injure Elhokar's arm, who drops shardblade.. holding his son close..
  • Noro kills Sah, Khen kills Noro.. numb, he thinks to get to Elhokar.. who in turn is holding sheet of paper.. stutters first ideal..but before he finishes, Moash (gloom clinging to him) runs Elhokar through the chest.. it is a mess.. Gav is the one mentioned in death-rattles?
  • Moash stabs Elhokar through eye as well, waiting until glow around Elhokar fades, shardblade clangs to ground.. he'd shoved Gav aside earlier.. Moash kicks the blade aside..looks to Kal and makes bridge four salute..
  • Kal's remaining men escape, queen's guard scoops Gav..Azure's men limped back before growing parshman armies
  • queen transforms, strange crystal formations having pierced her skin like carapace..chest glowing bright with gemstone..
  • Skar and Drehy drive them back.. Adolin grabs Kal..
  • so, Kal has failed to protect.. bond breaks again?

grieve later

  • epigraph - someone forsaw something - as Wit said, don't trust anyone who forsees :P
  • Adolin sees destruction and admits city is lost.. he sees Kal dazed, but doesn't fully understand why
  • Shallan tells what she heard from Sja-anat.. Adolin asks to do it anyway.. Sanderson, what are you doing to us :D
  • pattern is no help.. so many lies, doesn't know
  • as Shallan uses pattern to engage the oathgate, Sja-anat says it will try not to kill you.. Wit had earlier said something about the spren of this fabrial too..
  • where will it take, will they die? go to another oathgate city? Rall Elorim? land middle of nowhere? cognitive realm?
  • and part-3 hasn't ended yet... too much to take in :P

that others may stand

  • epigraph - fourth ideal to earn armor
  • but of course, scenes moves to Urithiru.. let's see how Dalinar is coping up with his memories
  • stormfather can see Dalinar's pain too now, due to bond.. never bonded before or forgot those memories?
  • Mr. T led the tour for Azish (day before) after Dalinar welcomed them..they'd return soon for more in-depth meeting about coalition
  • so, the ardent in Kholinar managed to send another msg after the one asking to get ready.. says remnants of guards captured and imprisioned, city fallen.. no word on team sent.. msg cuts off, likely the screaming spren and Fused arrived

this place

  • ominous chapter title
  • epigraph - saying goodbye.. never understand what they meant by Sibling.. I suppose this chapter will be end of part-3
  • okay, cognitive realm.. Azure helps Adolin from drowning..Shallan steps to kneel beside him.. Kal was standing up, shaking himself..a circular stone platform where the control building had been, like island in ocean of beads
  • hovering in air were two enormous spren, 30ft tall.. pattern says this is bad, very very bad.. scrambles back and collides with Syl... another spren beside her, ashen brown features made of tight cords..ragged clothing, eyes scratched out.. Adolin's blade spren?
  • only control building ppl here - Shallan, Adolin, Kaladin, Azure.. Azure hates this place :P
  • and finally end of part-3

interlude 7 - envoy

  • so Venli's new form is called envoyform..speak and understand all languages..
  • telling portion of her story as commanded by Odium(really it is him?)
  • wondering what happened to the small group who rejected Eshonai's call for conversion to stormform
  • hierarchy - listeners: common singers, bonding voidspren like envoy: Regals and Fused.. what about unmades?
  • pouch at her belt - comet spren?
  • Fused say KRs more powerful than them.. should exterminate humans, otherwise they'll never be safe..
  • Venli appreciates man-made things.. wonders if they could really exterminate humans..
  • comet-spren is indeed inside the pouch along with spheres and gemstones.. displays curiosity like spren.. rhythms too.. so Eshonai connection again..

interlude 8 - mem

  • Mem knows all about fabrics and what soap to use and so on.. place Vedenar
  • trying to clean a stain on Mraize's clothing - both oil and blood
  • her assistant Pom turns out to be Shalash, destroys find piece of her art (made by Oilsworn) from Mraize's collection
  • and it was planned by Mraize to draw in Shalash.. hmm she turns to leave but Mraize says he knows where Taln is :P
  • Mraize says the stain Mem removed was aether... (any relation to that unpublished book? don't remember any details)

interlude 9 - true labor begins

  • Venli thinks Eshonai would have enjoyed the sights she saw flying with the Fused
  • she's brought to Kholinar, after the events of part-3.. told her true labor begins now

interlude 10 - sheler

  • sheler is lighteyed of fifth dahn.. captured by Herdazians for robbing and murdering.. given 3 choices and he chooses hog
  • 'hog' turns out to have enormous claw as it breaks the surface of the ocean, not a pig as he thought
  • but but but, the crazy general said he's tried it himself.. hmm

interlude 11 - her reward

  • Venli has named the comet-spren as Timbre
  • gives her presentation dozen times a day, to groups of singers brought out of city to her, sequestered in stormshelter
  • Timbre tries to go outside, Venli Commands to stay inside.. says spren like her are being watched
  • Timbre tries to plead something to Venli who is still asking questions to herself.. Timbre is terrified of everstorm
  • she's given vision, similar to Dalinar.. Odium says she must tell the story well enough, or will be destroyed
  • I find it odd that Odium has to depend on Venli :D

voices

  • whoa, that's a big cast.. so many POVs..finally Szeth :)
  • been 3 years since Rift.. Dalinar has good days and bad days
  • today is bad one.. reminded of Rift/Evi from lot of things, sons of highprinces afraid of him, fire, smoke, Adolin, etc
  • goes to find a drink (his way of coping bad days) from Ahu the beggar, who hears voices
  • Ahu asks who got to Dalinar.. rattles of names of unmades.. and some insight about madness.. wondering if he's a Herald :P
  • he thought the drink has helped but then hears Gavilar, Adolin and Elhokar discuss about his drunkedness..

damnation

  • pic of shadesmar.. mountains as trenches.. land as sea.. spren fishing.. nice notations, avoid at all costs, etc
  • epigraphs from Mythica, the book Shallan got in Kholinar.. so Oathbringer epigraph again in part-5? will it be epilogue? without giving details? :D
  • anyway, this epigraph says unmades were each a specific kind of spren, endowed with vast powers (by whom? did it exist before Adonalsium shattering and later corrupted by Odium?)
  • hmm, interesting.. Kaladin floats in air here too..he's worried about Drehy and Skar.. what changed, out of his daze?
  • Syl shouts that stormlight will draw everything's attention... Shallan says they are still on other side, might be safer than they are
  • something enormous shifts in the beads.. Syl pleads with Kal who seemed to see her for first time, light vanishes and he drops
  • the strange spren with scratched out eyes doesn't seem frightened..
  • Azure came to Roshar about a year ago... had guides... didn't come with Zahel then? who's been in Roshar for years..
  • yay, I was right.. the strange spren is Adolin's sword.. she screeched when Adolin tried to summon his blade
  • pattern says the two large sprens are souls of oathgate.. one deep beneath is likely one of the unmade, very large on this side.. what about the souls of things they are wearing, dust and other materials on oathgates, etc?
  • Kal back to being dazed.. Syl protectively rests a hand.. says Kal is not well.. this is your change Syl, mother him :).. and Kal comes out a bit, says he has to be well.. asks how to get to safety..
  • Azure tells about inverse nature.. Adolin points out river.. beads rattle and big things with claws emerged in many directions...heartbeat begins sounding, rattling the beads..
  • Adolin thinks this is damnation for sure despite what others told
  • pattern says he doesn't remember.. what about Syl
  • Shallan using stormlight doesn't attract notice like Kal's did..with pattern's suggestion, she used bead of a shield.. which she then uses as a guide to get others beads to lock together as imitation of shield.. pattern could jump on it without sinking..
  • she asks for Azure's sword, and others to help.. asking Kal to see if he can brood this place into submission :P :P.. and she's trying to suppress what happened at Kholinar.. to focus on task at hand
  • searching, Shallan touches various objects and even Drehy.. finally spots one that could help.. oathgate control building.. asks others to hop onto the roof.. Kal is carrying a pack.. what's in it?
  • with another bead representing a door and this building, they progressed towards land(river).. eel-like spren followed them.. others let them pass without much notice.. pattern says emotions on other side helping them
  • the spren of Oathgates been corrupted by Odium, that's why they ended up in shadesmar.. Sja-anat had spoken true..
  • Adolin feels useless.. Kal is even worse.. Adolin takes his pack.. Kal says he survived bridge 4, he's strong enough to survive this
  • Adolin says he talks when he's frightened.. somehow keeps Kal talking too :) Kal thinks spren are born here..
  • they reach the land.. Adolin notices Azure's hair fading color.. black to faint grey.. hmm..
  • Adolin tells they'll camp.. mentions everybody except his blade spren.. and realizes he is now King, Gav taken, Dalinar planning to abdicate
  • may be this also a reason why we didn't get to see declaration of Dalinar as highking with Elhokar under him as king of Alethkar

reborn

  • yay, Szeth...just Szeth.. reborn.. not son-son stuff or truthless
  • they are at Purelake..five other hopefuls, close enough to surges.. they can see his glowing afterimage of soul not properly attached.. they feared, of course because of Nightblood :P
  • about 50 skybreakers here to watch hopefuls.. dozens were supposedly out on missions..Nale ain't here
  • hopefuls are asked to say the first ideal.. Szeth says them eyes closed..
  • weird way of speaking ideals, attracting highspren, etc.. nobody has achieved all 5 ideal in centuries
  • hopefuls are lashed for practice
  • Nightblood says lots of lies, particularly about being drawn.. Szeth calls him sword-nimi.. Nightblood can see stuff, not like a man though

why he froze

  • hmm, we get a Kal flashback.. his time in Amaram's army.... he froze because he knew he could hurt/kill.. not out of fear.. we see him talking to Tukks
  • yay for Syl's quips... she finds Pattern strange because he's nice :P
  • Syl tries to cheer him up with talking and quips.. but nope.. Kal had never locked up in real combat.. and that has got him in all sorts of knots..

water warm as blood

  • test of some sort.. some criminals have escaped, they have to be executed.. Szeth asks questions
  • talking to Nightblood, he says he knew a voice like Nightblood's once.. a single one, in his mind..when he was young..
  • Szeth catches one escaped convict.. fights and manages to knock him out.. asks a few questions and leaves him to drown..
  • Nightblood calls that cruel..and says Vivenna used to tell that cruelty is only for men as is mercy.. beasts cannot choose.. goes on about Shashara, Vasher, etc and Szeth thinks he meant Shalash..
  • Szeth determines the nobleman who'd called the skybreakers to be worst of criminals.. uses Nightblood to kill him.. it drained his spheres, was painful to use and even drained something of his color.. Nightblood of course gleefully munched
  • Nightblood asks Szeth if he was drawn.. tells Vivenna never drew him even once.. Szeth figures out Nightblood sense of time is greatly skewed
  • Ki is satisfied with and takes him on as squire.. Szeth asks another question before swearing second ideal.. and now can draw stormlight.. all this without bonded to spren.. other Skybreakers accept the words and thats it..

kata

  • Adolin wakes with cricks and pains.. thinks about Sadeas murder.. and curses seeing his spren staying so close to him
  • Adolin tries to talk to his sword as usual..but of course no response.. he is not feeling anything from the beads, only dull impression of something red..
  • he sighs about not knowing things.. and starts morning kata..to loosen his muscles and to calm himself
  • Azure joins and does the kata with him exactly..and then Kal joins of course.. it is like meditation for Adolin
  • Shallan asks if they are dancing :P Azure asks where Adolin learned that kata.. from his swordmaster... likewise for Azure :P well done Zahel :P
  • Adolin spots his swordspren standing on the coast, looking at her feet..
  • supply list.. one bag of gemstones, roughly half stormlight used up in coming to island.. satchel, charcoal, reed pens, brushes, ink, lacquer, some solvents, 3 sketchpads, sharpening knife, jar of jam for emergency snack..Adolin's side knife.. Azure's blade the only real weapon..
  • Kal says something, Shallan turns it around to him :P.. but his pack does have travel rations.. combining all their ration packs, they have maybe one day's worth of water and 3 meals for 4 ppl..
  • Azure says last time she crossed shadesmar, it took 4 weeks.. Adolin notices her scars have faded and hair back to dark coloring..
  • Azure says there's another way to transfer between realms, she's obviously used it.. tells she's from far land, came to Roshar by crossing shadesmar.. come on ppl, ask more questions.. you need to know about worlds elsewhere :-/
  • anyway, she came chasing someone, a criminal..she thought she'd get info from Wall Guards..things went wrong and she got stuck..she used Cultivation's perpendicularity.. Horneater Peaks.. another one(Honor's) appears randomly in different places..guides warned against it
  • Kal asks who were the guides - spren of course..not those like fear/pain spren.. people spren.. (like Syl and Pattern)
  • Adolin asks the obvious question about her blade.. nope, not KR or Herald, and the sword has not spren because it's flawed.. can't summon/dismiss..handy though, pale copy of shardblades..
  • when she last crossed this place, she hired a ship..sailed by spren, hired at one of their cities..
  • lightspren are usually guides..they like to travel, sail across Roshar's shadesmar.. peddling goods, trading with other spren..and supposed to watch out for Cryptics :P Pattern hums happily..
  • food and water can be found..make it to port city..humans living in this realm, there are some, need constant supply..with stormlight to trade, maybe they can buy passage to Horneater Peaks..
  • they are interrupted by haunting screech.. Azure tells them to move now.. those are wrong types of spren :P

a small bottle

  • who cut the onions

inescapable void

  • epigraph - Yelig-nar had great powers..perhaps all surges compounded in one..could transform any voidbringer into extremely dangerous enemy, swalling a gemstone to engage this process.. so Aesudan at present the most dangerous enemy in Roshar?
  • one of the dream I got last night - Kal doesn't recover from daze, Lift heals him, involving forced spiritual aspect as well, his shash brand disappears at last
  • another one was about Horneater Peaks - Azure came via perpendicularity there and somehow found the Gavilar's gemstone Szeth had hidden (I don't even remember where Szeth actually hid it and what happened to that gemstone)
  • anyway, right now Kal's emotions (as per Pattern, very inconvenient here) has drawn the angersprens and they are trying to flee from them.. Kal is feeling something to avoid the coming darkness, his spiral down
  • Syl tells Kal about her birth, bonding to elderly KR but KR died soon..turned out good for Syl as Recreance happened soon after..
  • chapter ends with spotting a lighthouse

pieces of a fabrial

  • first day of monarchs meeting at Urithiru
  • bridge four not worried about Kal..echo the same sentiment Kal himself had said in shadesmar.. they have taken turns with honorblade to be unpredictable who has it
  • Ialai ignores bringing own chair..Mraize has brought one for her..Amaram in Thaylen.. Azish, Fen, Mr.T etc are here too.. as well as Au-nak, Natan ambassador
  • Lift is in eating contest with Rock :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
  • the monarchs are bickering as expected.. Ialai drops bombshell that they should invade Shin for its resources
  • somehow Navani manages to focus on strengths of each kingdom/monarch.. Jasnah has some points as well.. now everyone knows that Alethkar is in enemy control as well
  • they seem to agree that they have to secure what lands they have first
  • Mr. T pipes up wondering if his land is next to be captured :P well played.. Dalinar asks for support and Azish agree to send some
  • Navani suggests Dalinar to visit new place.. Vedenar as Mr. T has asked him for a tour as well as assess situation against parshmen attack - so, Mr. T gonna try to remove Dalinar there and make it look it enemy attack/accident? :P that also points a way for Dalinar to be author of Oathbringer and may be meet our pals in shadesmar

riino

  • epigraph - Sja-anat most feared by KRs..ability to corrupt lesser spren
  • more Kal flashbacks.. tells about the time he was leading slaves to escape but get caught.. he survived, like he always did..related as now Kal is trying to scout on the approach to lighthouse
  • but of course his emotions makes it futile.. anticipation spren follow him..there is an old Shin man inside and spots Kal before he can duck :p
  • all sorts of strange growth, very very slow, in shadesmar..
  • Shallan feels Veil as broken.. starts drawing some of the spren they've seen.. ends up with child like scribbles
  • Syl and Pattern have a chat - awwwww
  • honorspren mimic Honor, Cryptics mimic fundamental underlying mathematics by which natural phenomena occur..truths that explain fabric of existence.. no wonder he said 'divide by zero' :P
  • while Shallan and Adolin chat (with Adolin massaging her shoulders) they spot a corrupted gloryspren
  • Shin man is trying to show Kal something of the future/fortune..Kal says he has no idea what he means.. manages to tell he is looking for passage
  • there's a highstorm going on in physical realm, Kal is very drawn by the sphere that the old man uses to tell fortune.. touches it and feels himself get carried away by storm
  • the corrupted gloryspren lands on Shallan, speaks with voice of Sja-anat.. tells - Odium suspects they survived, he lied saying they were sent far far from point of transfer, Odium's minions will hunt them..but Odium thinks Shallan is Elsecaller, not Lightweaver.. (so Odium has connections in Urithiru?).. Sja will do what he can, not sure Odium trusts him any longer.. I don't feel like trusting this Sja-anat :P
  • Kal is riding the storm.. yay, hope something positive comes of it :P
  • uh oh.. Kal feels shimmering colors, clouds that fade into light.. and Dalinar.. kneeling someplace dark, surrounded by nine shadows.. flash of glowing red eyes... WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
  • screams trying to reach Dalinar..flash of vaguely familiar city..wall and ocean beyond.. back to shadesmar..
  • the shin man(Riino) realizes Kal has seen something.. says he is Invested.. which heightening, unless Surgebinder.. he didn't know KRs are back
  • Riino has food and supplies for trade, only stormlight accepted as payment
  • Azure says she has met only Wit who has truly understood spiritual realm.. they eat canned food..Syl is outside, didn't want to enter lighthouse.. hmm
  • ship will be coming soon, going to Celebrant.. the lake near Rift.. Kal borrows Shallan's drawing stuff (which he had said useless earlier :P) - the city he'd seen with Dalinar vision was Thaylen City...
  • well, looks like Dalinar gonna be enemy champion.. but who knows with Sanderson.. he might well still be against Odium in that form :P
  • Kal says oathgate at Thaylen might be a possibilty to go back, but will require Shallan figuring out how to work it.. Azure still says Horneater peaks as sure way to go back.. but she doesn't know that place is also possibily corrupted/dangerous IIRC.. oh Riino has said something strange is happening there.. good
  • ship arrives.. pulled by spren by chull carts in physical realm :D..

loopholes

  • Szeth and other squires are practising lashing by playing a game on long poles.. Szeth is enjoying it..
  • Szeth displays all his skills.. manages to draw two highspren at the end.. small slits in the air, exposing black field full of stars
  • he wants to bond highspren now.. say his 3rd ideal.. Nale has come and says No.. time for them to learn two greatest secrets he knows..

reachers

  • reachers are lightsprens.. on the top deck of ship.. Syl has changed - dress red, hair black, skin tan..
  • what exactly are the spren reading?
  • moneychangers in shadesmar have perfect gemstones to hold stormlight indefinitely
  • a device running on stormlight produces water..very slow process..Syl is pouty because they won't let her ride one of the flying spren :P
  • Syl has changed appearance by asking Shallan to lightweave.. because she doesn't want rumors of honorspren spreading from ship's crew :D
  • Syl is still going about encouraging Kal to talk to Shallan.. no matter her causal to Adolin.. she very well knows Kal's feelings
  • hmm Shallan's sketches are excellent as always.. because she's using stormlight now? and other sketches are like stick figures... what's the mystery here..
  • oh Shallan-Kal exchanging witty sentences.. Syl's plan seem to be working..
  • ok, Azure has mentioned about chasing bounties and traveling worlds.. and what else has she said? what Shallan and co think about other worlds out there????? come on Sanderson, be a sport
  • Shallan is cautious about Kal's vision.. likely Wit's warning coming to mind.. and I do think it is possible the vision was corrupted or placed on purpose.. leading them to trap or something.. but how'd they count on Kal touching the sphere?
  • aww.. talking to Shallan feels right.. not like Laral/Tarah.. pushes away darkness.. where is Adolin, is he watching this :P

an old friend

  • Dalinar still feeling bad.. what happens if he breaks his ideal.. stormfather dead? :P
  • Mr. T shows half-shard shield.. uses gemstone that imprisons the kind of spren that gives things substance..the kind that holds the world together..something that might have blessed a KR.. who found out about it.. Mr. T on a brilliant day?
  • Mr. T is so very excited to tell Dalinar about capturing a spren - lure the spren into something it loves.. give it something familiar to draw it in, something it knows deeply.. in that moment, it becomes your slave..
  • Dalinar is not interested in that, excuses himself..Rial mentioned again..
  • a soldier who survived the civil war tells that those fighting didn't want to stop even when they should have..the Thrill..and Dalinar can feel it now! nooooooo
  • he deduces he had'nt overcome the Thrill in shattered plains, instead it had left him, to come to Vedenar..he tries to escape.. goes to oathgate
  • Vedenar curates/ardents declare him heretic..Thrill is building up..
  • stormfather rumbles that something is wrong (unmade related to Thrill? is that why Mr. T brought him here?), something hidden to him..
  • Dalinar summons stormfather as blade and engages the oathgate.. but the Thrill has followed him to Urithiru..goes to Adolin's room and succumbs to drinking bottle of wine kept for special occasion..
  • so Thrill is now set loose in Urithiru? madness..

deadeye

  • Adolin is making do with what clothes he can get to style himself.. gets a compliment - looking like an honorspren going to Feast of Light.. I am sure this Feast will be some important thing later on :P
  • just exactly how many humans (refugees, merchants, explorers) come to shadesmar? isn't it supposed to be dangerous place? how do they come, via perpendicularity? how common is the knowledge?
  • second highstorm since they have come to shadesmar..well well, Azure hints at her Nalthis royal heritage and about giving up duty to someone who's better at it.. that gets to Adolin thinking.. earlier he'd been thinking about if he was king
  • Adolin's spren been named deadeye.. I don't like it.. deadeye locked in a room for safety... the caption Ico's father in there too.. another dead KR spren..
  • they've arrived at Celebrant city
  • the captain also tells that Cultivation's perpendicularity has gained poor reputation, too many ships vanishing.. and suggests them to stay in shadesmar :P
  • hmm, captain says his daughter used to work in moneychanger building before running off to chase stupid dreams
  • Syl wants to go with Shallan.. something sure is fishy.. she is princess or something? :P

Celebrant

  • many radiant spren along with other sprens..no honorspren though..
  • you go Syl, you are more than match for both Kal and Adolin :P.. are you going to get a kid here though?
  • Syl gets some clothes for herself when Adolin stops to get some... and again puts out Kal's question with punchy words :) :)
  • Kal notices a painting depicting the champion with nine shadows.. finds himself drawn to it.. just what is going on? :-/
  • Shallan and co having no luck getting a ship to Cultivation perpendicularity.. voidspren sailing warships, demanding tribute from any who approach.. honorspren really have some sort of reputation.. mostly bad I think.. no wonder Syl is disguised
  • Fused are running inspections.. great, just what our heroes needed :P
  • wow, the painting Kal is drawn too has come from Court of Gods(Nalthis?).. is it the same painting Lightsong asked to be preserved? does that mean Kal is interpreting just like Lightsong did?.. done by Nenefra.. who is that..
  • Ico's ship has been set to fire.. been months since voidspren/Fused have had come to some understanding with sprens in this city..Azure sure has become comfortable using damnation as swear word
  • there is reward put on Syl since she snuck away.. posted on eery port in shadesmar :D :D :D honorspren captial is Lasting Integrity
  • she is kinda spren lighteyes :D should have known her disguise won't work - she is beautiful and interesting.. more, I want more Syl quips :)
  • registrar tells they've waited so long for KRs.. but they already knew about Syl isn't it? anyway, tells them to get on a ship while registrar will try to stall..
  • oh, that brilliant ship in white and gold belong to honorspren :P Syl sees and gasps they have to hide.. sure sign that they are going to board that ship :P and Syl will say something wordy it was all along a plan or something
  • and sure enough, seeing no other escape route.. Syl shows herself.. the white and gold starting to move stops.. and Fused apparently won't pursue honorspren ship..

hypocrite

  • another chapter title based on something from part-1
  • Dalinar in a vision again.. Nohadon aged, writing shopping list.. Dalinar assumed it was TWoK.. Nohadon did walk all the way to Urithiru, with some help to reach caverns..
  • sees a shadow causing trouble, but nobody else notices/reacts..Dalinar thinks Nohadon reminds him of Mr. T.. probably this whole vision thing is Mr. T's fabrication..
  • hmm.. the shadow turns out to be from thunderclast..Nohadon simply touches and it stills.. seems like whoever/whatever Nohadon is knows this is a vision
  • Dalinar wakes.. seems like it was dream? anyway, he recalls Gavilar's murder night..

strength

  • but the flashback chapter has to wait.. Navani POV again.. goes to meet highprinces(s) to deal with running of Urithiru..in absence of Dalinar
  • Teft back to moss stuff..
  • Jasnah not excited about translating Dawnchant.. what secrets she fears will come out?
  • Navani is troubled by Jasnah's notes and reports collections about Renarin and other radiants and sprens

spirit, mind and body

  • well, flashback as expected.. not events leading to Gavilar's death.. but aftermath..
  • Ketek by Navani for Gavilar.. will that be used for one of the later books?
  • Jasnah has already found the quote Gavilar asked Szeth to write in TWoK.. she's been reading it, Dalinar hears and comes to ask
  • after entire book is read out by Jasnah, Dalinar decides to go meet Nightwatcher..

law is light

  • collecting stuff on the way, Szeth and co have reached Marat.. one of the enemy controlled region
  • Nale says he's visited Ishar, most wise of them..
  • Nightblood wants to be drawn, says Nale might be evil :P wants to show he is better than the honorblade Nale carries, now summoned
  • Nale also became Skybreaker, all 5 ideals.. he thinks he's the only Herald to do so..
  • he now wants to tell Szeth about the decision made by Heralds, the day of Aharietiam..

the first step

  • Dalinar feels better, shaves.. finds Mr. T and together go to attend the monarch meeting..
  • stormfather strangely helpful, says he felt Kal during recent highstorm..but he cannot see him or others..had presumed them dead, but now find himself believing.. Dalinar says he has hope..
  • during break, Dalinar wonder about oathgate and what seems wrong with plans to fortify Jah Keved.. Jasnah brings some scholarly reports.. Ialai asks to see and Jasnah battles her away with words..Ialai is smart enough to concede, not so Ruthar.. but that gives Dalinar what he'd been missing
  • Dalinar thinks it will be Thaylen.. ships would come into play as well.. Amaram is there.. Kal's vision had pointed to Thaylen.. Nale and Szeth in Marat.. Sanderson avalance has started I suppose
  • Mr. T is crying again, tells Dalinar is a good man, he'd not expected that
  • who is stormfather thinking of when he says he's been watching one of the enemy forces - Venli? Dalinar is going to visit her in vision.. could stormfather provide details of parshendi forces? where they are positioned?
  • hmm, Moelach in Horneater peaks, Joshor on his way there.. and all Mr. T and Adrotagia think of is having access to death-rattles again
  • Malata shows off, tells Spark is happy to spy and stuff.. 100s of ashspren were killed because of organized devotion to Honor..so Spark is game for whatever it takes to get vengeance..and break stuff
  • they are planning to release Dalinar's secrets and certain passages of Dawnchant translations.. they feel it will be enough to finish off Dalinar..

honor's path

  • cool sketches of anticipationspren
  • been a week since boarding the ship named honor's path..out now after being locked in hold..Syl still imprisioned
  • Shallan thinks they are heading to Kharbranth..and suddenly changes to Veil attracted by Kal.. notices and changes back to Shallan.. Sanderson sure loves to keep us guessing.. and where is Adolin when these two are talking like this..
  • Shallan requests and gets permission to handle the beads.. but no using stormlight.. they were let out because it wasn't honorable to keep them as prisoners :P
  • anyway, she gets much needed practice for soulcasting..
  • voidsprens are creating their own empire in shadesmar, they control Cultivation's perpendicularity...
  • Azure's blade is more and more similar to Nightblood.. easing a bit from the sheath will bring something to investigate..
  • Azure and honorspren agree a deal to trade knowledge, once they reach their destination - Lasting Integrity.. in exchange she gets passage and info on Nightblood..as well as Vasher
  • Adolin notices Shallan's having trouble.. hugs her while she tells about her different personalities..
  • and then tells he killed Sadeas :D.. she doesn't tell about her doings though.. feels Dalinar is better off not knowing.. and finds peace, only for Kal to make noises and disturb :P
  • before Honor's death, he stopped creating honorspren..and asked stormfather to do it instead..stormfather created a few, all save Syl became deadeyes..then made 10 more after centuries..
  • Kal is thinking about ideals and what demands the 4th would do to him.. something crystallizes.. pinpricks of light.. mistspren near him gasps..whispers something in awe..
  • that leads to Syl contacting him.. because she feels his mind..stronger than usual..tell's he's close to 4th ideal.. the pinpricks are windspren
  • windspren are not common in shadesmar.. captain honorspren hasn't seen one before.. says they're beautiful..
  • Kal mentions Dalinar is bonded to stormfather.. says he needs to keep his oath.. gets to tell his dialogue again - Honor is dead
  • and finally, Adolin mentions Shallan gaping at Kal..
  • the Fused are coming, at least 8 of them..

neshua kadal

  • kadal means sea in tamil.. Neshua Kadal is parshendi for KRs.. Venli going to be one? may be bondsmith since stormfather had noticed her for some reason?
  • okay, Renarin did try infusing the gemstone pillar, didn't work... I am guessing Bondsmith has to do something :P
  • they get confirmation from Fen that enemy is building navy at Marat..
  • Dalinar meets Venli in the vision and asks the cost of truce... not much time to talk as Odium arrives and tears things..
  • she sees Dalinar glowing.. despite herself, she feels awe seeing KR..
  • Dalinar somehow keeps things stable around him, not falling towards the rip in sky..
  • and Timbre is here too, fighting against wind in an attempt to reach her..bursts of light exploded from the spren in frantic rings
  • Timbre begins to slide back, Venli moves and snatches..
  • Kholinar mostly crumbles, except the spot held by Dalinar..chasm opens beneath her and she falls before reaching Dalinar.. he jumps into chasm..manages to touch Venli and send her back to cave in Marat..Timbre safe too
  • Odium forms figure of gold and white (strangely inverse of white and gold of honorspren ship? :P), holding scepter(important?) and asks what Dalinar was seeing
  • tells Dalinar that he'll destroy Roshar and Odium will rebuild it..
  • the price of keeping Odium back - stormfather crying like a child, whispering that Odium was too strong

a million stars

  • Kal and co still running from Fused, stormlight running low.. Syl's been released at last, unsteady though
  • oh, Azure knew from the kata that Zahel was Adolin's swordmaster :D asks him to warn Zahel that she is looking for him :D
  • she's asked for cloth cut into certain shapes.. yay, hope to see some awakened fun..
  • other than Azure, rest link up and jump into the bead ocean..shallow, as they were near the shore..
  • Shallan has made some kind of room..after Fused have passed, they start up the slope and reach ground..
  • overhead they could make out highstorm is raging in physical realm.. and seems to recharge both Pattern and Syl :P
  • Kal lashes them (including spren) to cover large distance before having to walk several days to reach the oathgate

eila stele

  • everything pointing to Thaylen City.. Dalinar himself has come.. but what about Mr. T's plans? spoiled? yet to hit?
  • Amaram reports good work done.. but what have you done to Taln?
  • Teft is here too.. how's your moss going..Renarin asks Fen's son if there are big gemstones around..
  • Mr. T seems worried about something..
  • Dalinar goes to meeting.. notes ppl.. and describes Lift 'listening' with cocked head..
  • apparently 'unite them' voice Dalinar hears is not stormfather's doing.. so who's that.. unmade? cultivation? wit? same voice as that Shallan's been hearing lately?
  • am sensing trap, enemy not going to attack Thaylen and surrounding area, or maybe the fleet will strike elsewhere and Fused/Unmade will come to Thaylen...
  • Renarin shifting uncomfortably and then leaves.. what has he seen :P maybe has become better in keeping things to himself? unlike scribblings before first everstorm
  • stormfather rumbles, warns storm is coming.. Jasnah and Navani are distracted by what they got instead of attending to spanreeds buzzing..
  • everstorm has hit shinovar, even though just 5 days since last one.. particularly violent..moving faster..
  • and ominously stormfather rumbles there's more.. Dalinar jumps back to feet, bridge four responds.. no attack
  • Navani gasps..Jasnah looks to Dalinar..Eila Stele has been translated..sources claim to be oldest document in written memory..by Heralds themselves..from translation, account of someone who witnessed very first coming of voidbringer.. before first desolation..
  • Navani reads - they came from another world, using powers we've forbidden to touch..dangerous powers of spren and surges..they destroyed their lands and come to beg..we took them in, as commanded by gods..but our pity destroyed us..their betrayal extended to even our gods - to spren, stone, wind..beware the otherworlders..traitors..tongues of sweetness..minds that lust for blood..do not take them in.. do not give them succor..they were named voidbringers for they brought void.. empty pit that sucks in emotion.. new god, their god..voidbringers know no songs..cannot hear Roshar..bring silence where they go..look soft, with no shell, but hard..have but one heart.. it cannot ever live..
  • Jasnah says - writer was Dawnsinger(parshmen)..one of original inhabitants of Roshar..the otherworlders they welcomed were humans..humans were named voidbringers..
  • okay, Jasnah spills Recreance secret - first desolation was invasion of human kind onto Roshar..seized land from parshmen..after accidentally used Surgebinding to destroy previous world(Ashyn?) ... so why did she speak like that to Kal?
  • sly Mr. T.. saying he wants to discuss about the translation.. but Fen and others have got other news about Dalinar
  • first up - highking/emperor business.. then accounts of two visions which Dalinar hadn't shared..where Odium had visited.. Lift gasps..bridge four mutters..
  • Jasnah quickly realizes what is happening.. someone deliberately released info at same time..
  • Dalinar realizes this was what feared..world that turns upon concerns of scribes and bureaucrats.. but shouldn't they at least wait for explanation after all Dalinar had done? what will Lift do? she was listening to something

for the living

  • another Kal flashback.. Tarah is leaving but Kal cannot make himself follow.. Tien's death still fresh
  • Tarah gives the chapter title - maybe Kal will learn how to be there for the living, not just for the dead
  • they finally reach the oathgate.. two sprens of it not looking corrupted
  • but the oathgate itself guarded by 100s-1000 of enemy spren

the thing men do best

  • epigraph.. speculation that Dai-Gonarthis, the ninth unmade, might have caused complete destruction of Aimia
  • stormfather says Shinovar was the land originally given to humans.. place where plants and animals humans brought could grow.. and that Recreance was caused not alone by origin of humankind but powerful fear that KRs would destroy this world too.. and that Dalinar would abandon his vow too.. Dalinar says he wont
  • Honor was dying in the days leading to Recreance.. didn't support KR when they learned the truth.. raved about Dawnshards, ancient weapons used to destroy Tranquiline Halls(Ashyn?)..promised that surgebinders would do same to Roshar.. (so Honor splintered himself? or Odium did it?)
  • Fen still asks Dalinar for support to protect Thaylen.. Mr. T says he no longer will fight beside Dalinar..he wishes he could explain and asks forgiveness..
  • even stormfather points out Dalinar been living a lie past 6 years..
  • end of part-4

interlude 12 - rhythm of withdrawal

  • wow, I was hoping for Rysn and Teft interludes and here they are :)
  • Venli gives the speech.. and then taken to fleet getting ready to sail..
  • Fused tells that strongest and most skilled of their number haven't awakened yet..don't want to fight war alone..when war is won, their vengeance taken, they will sleep, finally

interlude 13 - rysn

  • Rysn is bored.. but we aren't bored of her chapters
  • she's keeping Fen's ledgers.. noice job :D couldn't attend monarch meeting because of audit.. missed a storm then :D
  • still has the single pot of Shin grass.. what'll she think of it once she gets details of meet
  • and the larkin.. Chiri-Chiri breathed softly, sleeping among the blades of grass..wakes and wants to consume the light of sphere Rysn is working by.. she shooes the larkin who clicks in annoyance and flies to upper reaches of room.. favorite perch, lintel above doorway
  • Vstim, 70+, comes..Rysn is delighted..has accepted position in government - minister of trade..
  • oh, Renarin couldn't heal her legs.. too long since accident.. what about Lift..can she?
  • Vstim offers here deed of ownership - brand new ship with finest engineering..named Wandersail..
  • hmm, he wants to see queen's vault in person.. I vaguely remember Vstim connected to ghostbloods or some org..
  • they go into the vaults, somehow Chiri-Chiri has come too.. sensed something eh?
  • room full of million gemstones.. but not infused.. always here.. Vstim cites a number, Benval Diamond he had owned (typo? that way back when.).. observes it's smaller than he thought it would be
  • vault 13 - among other things has large ruby, size of child's head.. glowed brightly..King's Drop - that's the ruby charged to elsecallers for protection.. was referred as Honor's Drop though in epigraph...still glowing after being locked over 200 years ago.. guess this is one of those perfect gemstones - Renarin after this? :P
  • what does Chiri-Chiri think about this? Vstim says there are stories that it's a chunk off Stone of Ten Dawns
  • a guard kills Tlik..Vstim dodges and raises alarm..Vstim is knocked out..the guard is hit with crossbow..
  • but he heals his wounds..has set aside the ruby to deal with more guards coming..Chiri-Chiri lands on the cloth containing ruby..Rysn crawls and snatches the gemstone..
  • she uses the cord Vstim gave her to tie around the ruby, attaching to her ankle.. then started pulling along the shelves.. Chiri-Chiri is feasting on the ruby :P gonna transform with such huge amounts?
  • the guard comes with bloody sword..Chiri moves with blinding speed to distract..and feeds - dark violet light.. so it is a Fused come to thieve?
  • she kills the Fused with crossbow bolt.. Chiri is bigger.. she pulls herself toward vault door - Vstim as well second set of keys
  • so, will the dark violet light affect Chiri? is Nightblood similar to what Chiri-Chiri does?

interlude 14 - teft

  • they have come back to Urithiru, courtesy Malata operating the oathgate
  • the blue-white spren tells him to speak the words..suddenly warns something is very wrong, to run..
  • blood in bridge four barracks.. he thinks the three are corpses.. finds a pulse on Rock though.. Eth had been carrying honorblade, now dead..someone wearing Teft's bridge four coat(he'd sold that for spheres..) had attacked..
  • Teft leaves..
  • assuming it was Mr. T and co, as they would have known blade secret as well as what would happen at the meet.. but can't rule out Ialai and her spies or Mraize..
  • but given Rysn interlude, it could well be parshmen, so as to use oathgates? and wondering what sort of clues I missed in earlier chapters

the cost

  • another big cast for POVs
  • first up is Dalinar flashback.. wait for Oathbringer epigraph continues
  • Dalinar less than a day off from visiting Nightwatcher in The Valley.. hope to get some details.. something happened during the storm, but Dalinar doesn't remember..
  • Felt had visiter Nightwatcher, tells Dalinar to go after dark, alone.. it is upto Nightwatcher to visit the seekers..
  • plenty of plant life and chickens.. Dalinar goes alone after dark.. hears voices..sees himself killing Elhokar, conquering and burning villages in Vorin kingdoms..
  • Nightwatcher comes, asks what boon drives him.. Son of Honor, Son of Odium.. Dalinar whispers for 'forgiveness'
  • she continues to give options he'd want.. mentions about a blade that bleeds darkness and cannot be defeated(Nightblood?) tells forgiveness is no boon..
  • another voice, 'that is enough, child' startles them both.. Nightwatcher calls her mother.. so Cultivation? woman with brown skin.. matronly build..
  • the woman says the boon is beyong Nightwatcher and asks Dalinar to attend to herself instead.. has come for first time in centuries..
  • am gonna assume it is Cultivation, given Dalinar sees eternity in her and stormfather mentioned Dalinar met her
  • Cultivation says she will give him a pruning, careful excision to let him grow.. cost will be high.. ofcourse Dalinar is ready for anything
  • in doing so, Cultivation is providing a weapon for Him(Odium?)..dangerous, very dangerous..yet all things must be cultivated..what she takes from him will grow back eventually(the reason why Dalinar gets his memory back?) it is part of the cost..it would do her well to have part of him..even if ultimately he becomes His..Dalinar was always bound to come to her..she controls all things that can be grown, nurtured..that includes the thorns..
  • so Dalinar is Son of all three now eh? Honor, Odium, Cultivation.. and clue that Dalinar indeed becomes being with 9 unmade shadows
  • boon is removing voices but cost is all of Evi gone too
  • Dalinar feels very very tired next morning..doesn't remember what had happened.. but finds he can't remember Evi at all..

the wrong passion

  • epigraph from eila stele... what???? we won't get anything beyond preface for Oathbringer? :( :( :( :(
  • the Fused/parshmen fleet have come riding the everstorm.. Dalinar remembers Cultivation memory too now.. with TWoK in hand, he steps out the door into the city
  • Adolin and Shallan think they were led here purposely with Kal's vision..Kal tries to tell it was from stormfather, not Odium.. the group feels dejected, Syl-Kal say they can't back down now..
  • Jasnah thinks Thaylen City is lost..hopes Amaram's soldiers would soak up arrows/spears long enough for civilians to evacuate.. then tells herself to focus on what she could do.. she has pressing matter to deal with, Ivory says facts align.. a traitor is.. goes to temple of Pailiah'Elin, finds Renarin alone
  • spren rises from Renarin's back, bright red, shimmering like heat of mirage.. crystalline structure..not the spren of Truthwatchers..Jasnah summons Ivory as blade
  • Venli sees singers from different nationalities, but frightened, uncertain.. she's given a sword for defence
  • parshmen from Thaylen City are unwilling to attack their home..ask that can they not settle elsewhere? seems like Alethi parshmen were quick to attack given the nature of Alethi and these from Thaylen have known fishing more than warring
  • Venli sees Alethi troops and thinks it will be a slaughter.. then feels something odd, ghostly spren fill the area around her, Fused who haven't yet chosen a body..two of them roughly the size of buildings..and one tall as small hill..made of red smoke..Venli was seeing into another world(cognitive realm?).. and Odium has come personally to supervise
  • Teft is trying to hide..the spren is still following him.. he sees parshmen coming from Kholinar oathgate.. so they were the ones to steal honorblade? where'd they get another to open from their side? KR helping them?
  • Navani thinks situation is not so bad, they can defend.. and then a thunderclast comes :P finally Jasnah scene coming up :)
  • Venli sees thunderclasts awaken..Fused are kneeling to Odium.. one of them fears for the armies.. Odium says they are here only to watch.. the big spren became real..looks like red mist.. Thrill..
  • Kal and co see the largest spren vanishing from Shadesmar..all the spren have gone to physical realm.. 6 Fused to guard..Kal says he'll distract them while Shallan can try to work the Oathgate.. Adolin ask if he's not worried where that army went?
  • Odium has brought the spren to bond the Sadeas army who've been wanting vengeance for his death.. look what you've done Adolin :P.. is that Amaram who's been bonded and glowing red?

alone

  • Kal goes alone to battle the six Fused.. drawing in stormlight and lashing himself for the first time in long time
  • Dalinar is going to join and feels Thrill.. No, he whispers.. thunderclast is moving towards gemstone reserves and Dalinar decides to go investigate what this is all about
  • the thunderclast attacks the reserve, million sparkling bits of glass catch sunlight as they fell over city, the wall and beyond
  • the Fused take Kind's Drop from Rysn..Dalinar wonders why simple gemstone was taken.. and then sees Sadeas army with glowing red eyes
  • Jasnah and Ivory realize it is spren of Odium bonded to Renarin, who is whispering, no..not father, no please
  • Shallan weaves light..about 20 individuals..Kal has drawn 4 Fused away.. Adolin goes along with illusions and Syl, Pattern, dead eyes.. which attracts the attention of remaining two Fused..Shallan slips to base of bridge..and steps up beneath the two sentinels of oathgate.. the sketch before this chapter is of this scene
  • air around Venli has cleared of spirits of dead, except single black figure of swirling smoke, near Odium.. Venli is asked to move forward, might be needed to speak for Odium.. King's Drop is just a precaution to avoid potential disaster.. I think the dark spirit is going to inhabit Dalinar and nobody would be able to prevent it..
  • Kal has managed to pry a lance from the Fused, even as he admires the way they move
  • Gawx feels they should go help Dalinar.. Lift had escaped before coming here.. early news comes that Alethi army is attacking Thaylen.. so they decide to flee.. Gawx wonders he and Lift both been wrong..
  • the sentinels refuse Shallan to use the portal, they are locked by word of their dead parent..(Honor? KRs before Recreance?) Adolin is acting like an illusion himself :D
  • Szeth hovering far above battlefield.. Nale is with him.. Nale asks whose law should be followed, original land owners parshmen or those of humans? Nightblood is itching to fight
  • Kal is managing well enough against the Fused, seemed like one Fused issues a challenge.. but then Kal's stormlight runs out
  • Navani and Fen are safe somehow.. Navani notices Dalinar going alone to face the army

champion with nine shadows

  • Lift joins Dalinar and is told to steal back King's Drop
  • Dalinar goes to meet Odium.. and is ready.. I didn't expect this to be happening this book itself..
  • Adolin's act is discovered and rammed in the gut.. I expected him to die, but his spren acts to distract the Fused
  • the other Fused attacks Shallan who manages to dive away..by instinct holds out for Pattern but of course that won't work..but somehow manages to erect a wall..using bead she'd used to cross the sea below..felt like soulcasting but different..pattern comes humming..
  • Shallan thinks she took the soul of wall and made its physical form appear here.. she finds Adolin severly wounded, Kal has fallen into beads..she falls into the beads with Adolin
  • yay, Lift POV..she imagines something crass as usual.. figures Wyndle ain't a voidbringer, but those parshmen looking Fused.. she reaches the Fused carrying the Drop (no stormlight though, Chiri drank it all? :O).. and she too thinks the Fused are more awesome than her
  • Nale says the skybreakers will swear to Dawnsingers.. what about Szeth? .. he asks if he can follow a person instead of law.. yup.. Szeth is gonna follow Dalinar :D
  • Syl leads Kal to a bank..Shallan and co have followed him..Kal checks on Adolin.. intestines are cut..Fused are coming.. Adolin wants to fight.. Kal thinks maybe they can surrender..Syl nods to Kal to say the words
  • Dalinar challenges Odium for contest.. freedom for Odium vs their lives.. Odium says as bondsmith Dalinar can offer this deal..but is that truly what Dalinar wishes of Odium?
  • human army grumbling at the delay as opening into city wasn't big enough for all of them to go at once.. so will they butcher each other?
  • Lift tries to imitate the Fused, feels for a moment to be gliding between worlds.. thunderclast sends her crashing..the Alethi are still trying to kill her, so she dodges towards the thunderclast..she gets crushed..heals slowly, running out of stormlight..summons Wyndle and holds towards the monster..
  • Szeth becomes her savior.. explosion of light, trailing black/white smoke, glowing like star hits the monster on head and cut straight through..halves of monster fell to sides, crashing into stone and burned away..Nightblood is feeding on the smoke :D
  • asks if Lift has been given task by Blackthorn.. yup, need to steal a large ruby back.. so he asks her to stand, his master has given a task to complete :)
  • Navani, Fen and Kmakl get captured by Sadeas's men..they feel they'll get handsome reward even if they can't kill them personally
  • and look who's here.. Ash herself! let's see what a Herald can do.. but first destroys another art of her.. dark dangerous day, as Odium has always tempted men to fight for him, but now bonded with spren..and storm of his own..thinks the land is finally doomed and that she couldn't care any longer..finds Taln.. (so Amaram was still keeping him close eh)
  • Glys was corrupted before Renarin formed their bond..he knew his death was coming as Jasnah strikes him down..what he sees happens no matter what, but still hopes Dalinar won't do it
  • Odium accepts contest of champions for fate of Roshar..and Dalinar is his champion.. man who will win no matter the cost..Thrill overwhelms him..

the weight of it all

  • Dalinar whispers No again..Odium asks what Evi says as Dalinar hears her voice..Odium says he made Dalinar kill Evi..caused all of this..going to help him remember.. but still Dalinar refuses to let Odium have the pain, hugging TWoK.. Odium then shows him the day he killed Evi
  • Szeth has put faith on Dalinar to know who should die.. not him nor Nightblood.. he is laying waste to Amaram's army..some voice tells him to remember the gemstone..phantom sense(Thrill?) calls him to revel in the butchery, but Szeth rejects..he had never enjoyed this
  • the Fused with gemstone snatches Nightblood's sheath from Szeth and uses it to block him..Nightblood is craving for destruction..black veins grow around Szeth's hand..
  • hmm Jasnah has still not actually struck down Renarin who is continuing to whisper about Dalinar..Ivory says Renarin sees what is to come, has Odium's power..
  • Ash has no luck with Taln who is still repeating about desolation to come, preparation, etc
  • Kal is struggling to say the words even as windspren appear around him..
  • Lift goes to Szeth who is being consumed by Nightblood..and he is unable to drop it..
  • Navani uses fabrial to induce pain on her captors, like thousand needles being shoved into skin, under nail, into eyes.. gets a gash in her arm..uses painrial to ignore it :P
  • Dalinar lives in two places..sees Rift scenes..clutches TWoK denying Odium.. but lightning from everstorm destroys it..sun is now hidden behind clouds and all fell into darkness
  • Teft is hiding while there is fighting going on.. bridge four dying
  • Kal is recalling ppl he'd seen fallen
  • Dalinar falls to his knees.. gloryspren swirls around him but Odium bats them away.. whats with gloryspren being batted by all in this book :P
  • stormfather is weeping too..Odium continues to tell him to let go, give it to him, blah blah blah
  • Lift takes Szeth's head in her hands and tries to heal him..eyes go wide as black veins began to grow up her fingers and hands
  • Renarin doesn't want to die but finds himself welcoming Jasnah's strike.. rather than see Blackthorn return with black armor and nine shadows..says Dalinar has fallen
  • Odium steps back to say it is done..Dalinar is now leader of Fused and their army..
  • Amaram comes to deliver Nightblood's sheath.. Odium gives him uncut smokestone to swallow, so that Yelig-nar gets another housing.. Aesudan was consumed.. Amaram asks if he can kill Dalinar.. someday, says Odium..assuming Dalinar doesn't kill Amaram.. asks Dalinar to stand and claim the station he was born to obtain, pain has passed
  • Kal is not strong enough to say the words..Adolin is bleeding..Syl pulls him tight as Kal sobs at his failure
  • Jasnah doesn't strike after all.. remember her time with Renarin as kids..wind blows through the temple, carrying with it pair of spren in form of golden spheres..pulls Renarin in an embrace, telling they'll find a way to fix it..
  • Ivory says somehow this was right.. Renarin realizes what he sees can be wrong
  • Dalinar has a gloryspren in his fist.. most important step a man can take is not the first, but the next one, always the next one.. tells 'you cannot have my pain'
  • Oh Sanderson, why you do this? please don't write a horror or dark fantasy book, these chapters have been dark enough..

unity

  • hmm, TWoK postscript as epigraph.. that means there is still hope for Oathbringer epigraph :)
  • Dalinar accepts what he's done.. Odium wonders what he could gain by keeping this burden..Dalinar says it would make him better, journey cannot be undertaken without a beginning..stormfather is surprised too
  • Jasnah is helping and leading Renarin towards light, stream of gloryspren moving there too
  • thousands of gloryspren swirl around Dalinar, Odium stumbles back.. 'Unite them' voice.. whose is it?????
  • Syl looks up and stares at ocean of beads..pull Kal tight and says it's time for someone to save him instead of other way around :)
  • whatever, UNITE THEM leads Dalinar to plunge his hands between realms, very fabric of existence..world of minds, realm of thought..and another hand into spiritual realm..Fused and Amaram stumble back.. Venli asks what is Dalinar?
  • Dalinar is standing with arms outstretched, holding to lands of mind and spirit... can't help but think of Sazed :)
  • closes his eyes to listen to a particular voice - Evi forgives him..
  • 'I am Unity' and Dalinar slams both hands together to combine all three realms to one.. that is whole lot awesomeness to take in.. and too much power
  • shadesmar explodes with light, Fused scream as wind blasts them away..Honor's perpendicularity is formed as brilliant glowing pillar..highway of glass..well of power that pierces all three realms..pathway home
  • Taln seems to have woken too.. gets Ash to tell how long its been.. 4k+ years.. he thinks it is wonderful.. enough time after desolation to have a chance..Ash is pleading for him to hate her :P.. he pulls her to someone waiting..
  • Teft speaks the words - 'I will protect those I hate, even if one I hate most is myself'
  • Jasnah soulcasts to sweep Amaram's soldiers.. and here we see her making steps to climb to the rooftop..
  • Renarin feels awesome strength, stormlight unending..looks though gap in wall to see column of light, rising higher and higher, stretching to clouds
  • Navani exults in storm of light, gloryspren around her flowing to join Dalinar..gemstones that had been lying ignored drink in stormlight from Dalinar.. light up ground..
  • Odium screams.. (and somehow Voldemort comes to mind :D) stumbles back, asking to kill/attack Dalinar..
  • stormfather says words are accepted..and stunned of course..
  • Amaram summons his blade..Dalinar says he could change too.. nope says Amaram..won't be forgiven by Him..
  • raises Oathbringer, portion of light split from Dalinar's column..light meets blade with explosion of sparks.. throws Amaram back..light resolves into Kal with Syl as spear..Shallan follows with thin blade and then Adolin..
  • Lift manages to hold until gemstones come alive and Nightblood is slaked by the stormlight..Lift now hears Nightblood's voice :D
  • Szeth face and Lift's arms are crisscrossed with lines where vines had been.. both walk to column of light
  • Dalinar knows Elhokar ain't coming..accepts the grief..opens his eyes and column of gloryspren fade..feels exhausted but field is littered with infused gemstones
  • Dalinar is direct conduit to spiritual realm, now that Honor ain't there.. he and stormfather are Connected
  • Renarin rushes to Adolin and heals him.. Lift and Szeth join too.. Szeth scoops the silvery sheath and puts Nightblood in it..
  • Dalinar counts to find 7 KRs are with him now.. stormfather points two more behind Jasnah..the Heralds
  • Odium has retreated into nothingness..Fused are remaining though.. Amaram is still alive...as well as strange spren like black smoke..Thrill still encompassed north side of landing near water..
  • Dalinar thinks there should be one more.. asks Renarin to stop the thunderclast from destroying oathgate and open the portal.. asks Shallan to lightweave an army to distract soldiers consumed by Thrill.. asks Jasnah to hold big hole in wall and stop anyone trying to get through..asks Kal to protect him from Amaram..asks Lift to retrieve the ruby along with Szeth(as told earlier)..she asks for food :P
  • Dalinar starts to walk toward water..to take away big stick brought by enemy
  • It is like Dalinar has suddenly turned into Dumbledore, knows what is what :P

the spear that would not break

  • Kal, alive with stormlight, lands near Amaram.. who's just swallowed something.. uh oh..Yelig-nar incoming
  • Adolin is being Adolin as usual.. asks Shallan to save the city as Radiant who creates an army of illusions.. he summons blade, no scream, says sorry and thanks and goes to help
  • Lift and Szeth are looking for the Fused with ruby.. Nightblood is his crazy self..starts humming after rambling about Vasher (where is he? fighting in Urithiru?)
  • Amaram has both Oathbringer and Helaran's blade..black smoke envelops Amaram and coming swinging with burst of speed.. Kal recognizes the smoke from Aesudan..
  • Dalinar steps into red mist, saying Hello old friend
  • all the ppl Shallan has sketched come.. even Yalb with glowing shardspear..pattern says she is close to them, close to realm of thought and beyond..all the ppl she has Connected over the years..her brothers come too..father, mother..which makes the illusions start to fail.. then Veil and Radiant seize her..other versions of herself try to come but she forces them off..farther out, 100s surged from ground and raise weapons at the enemy
  • Adolin sees Jasnah holding her own, geometric shapes outlining her.. leaves her to help a small group of beleagured Thaylen soldiers facing Amaram's soldiers and then Fen's son comes to ask Adolin's help
  • Jasnah is making full use of three realms still close after Dalinar had closed the perpendicularity..could easily see into cognitive realm and change soldiers at barest thought.. she's even horrified
  • Lift manages to find the Fused with ruby but that Fused flies off.. Lift lets loose her curses which impresses Nightblood.. Szeth moves to follow the Fused..manages to defeat the Fused and get the ruby.. but three more Fused now coming at him (noticed first by Nightblood :P)
  • Jasnah heals the wall :P Adolin gives instructions to hold it and goes to deal with cutting stone (thunderclast)
  • Kal is having difficulty guarding Dalinar as well as face Amaram.. Kal/Syl still haven't said anything about Szeth being alive again..
  • Dalinar relives his past with each step through the red mist.. that should be familiar for Aiel :P
  • Jasnah casually takes care of Fused while talking to Navani and Fen.. they have to hold the wall by conventional means once the stormlight runs out.. parshmen are now glowing red.. happy that both Renarin and Adolin are dealing with thunderclast, she'll now help her ward :P
  • what are Taln/Ash upto? nothing from them for long while..
  • why did the large ruby not fill with stormlight like the other gemstones??? Szeth hurls it away to escape the Fused, goes near Lift and recharges himself with stormlight.. Lift and Nightblood share a joke.. Lift's got an idea despite Szeth failing so far with the task given by Dalinar
  • Shallan is controlling 1000s of illusions, thinks she's somehow managed to combine both soulcasting and lightweaving.. drowns out Fused with sounds of screaming and metal on metal.. hear's a girl's voice - could she stop hugging herself for a minute, she needs some help.. who? Rysn?
  • Amaram is continuously transforming.. and even showing off KR skills.. trapping Kal and then gliding across.. Kal somehow still alive..Syl warns him of Fused getting close to Dalinar.. Kal manages to throw a stone..and then another at Amaram's horse..Kal's intention being to move the shardbow away
  • Syl suggest to stab Amaram in the face.. another Fused slams Kal with club.. did Amaram bring that Fused into play?
  • why did Szeth destory only one thunderclast? any, lets see what the Kholin bros will do..
  • Adolin is talking to the blade again..feels a stirring on the wind..hears a name - Mayalaran.. Maya in hindi has plenty of meaning, phantasm, allure, glamour, etc
  • manages to slice an ankle.. the monster cries out and slams a hand, Adolin dodges but the force makes him jump and he rolls.. face looks like chasmfiend.. manages to save a kid and then slice that ankle again.. a hand in shardplate grabs Adolin and pulls him inside
  • Dalinar accepts his past..thanks Thrill for giving him strength when he needed it..undestands the Thrill..
  • Venli chooses rhythm of lost, Timbre joins..vibrates through her entire being.. tries to say the first ideal but a Fused grabs and spins her..takes her pouch and turns it inside out..the Fused tells her to choose who she'll serve.. she chooses and now Timbre is within her..Timbre is keeping voidspren captive.. she can now drink stormlight :) completes the ideal
  • one of the Thaylen shardbearer has joined Adolin..asks him to distract the monster, he can take hits and Adolin can cut with blade
  • the Thaylen gets pinned by two Fused.. so Adolin throws Maya to kill one.. then manages to cut the monster's fingers but gets hit himself.. and then Maya comes even with 7 beats.. and then dogding a Fused, but falls in a heap courtesy thunderclast... Adolin manages to stand and falls into stonestance.. Renarin spots him and comes to heal, the thunderclast takes a step back.. Renarin says he can handle it and tells Adolin to please go :)
  • Renarin separates the monster's hand from wrist, heals more quickly than Adolin has seen Kal/Shallan do.. he gives his blade to the Thaylen shardbearer.. and still grabs a spear to go help others
  • Szeth had practised with all 10 surges.. one of Fused has slicked the ruby.. he attacks her knowing how she'll move, grabs the ruby in his jacket..
  • awesome, Lift and Szeth now have the real ruby while the Fused took from him a false one cut out of rock and covered in illusion :D
  • Szeth hears voice as nears the red mist, so asks Lift to deliver the ruby and goes to help Shallan..
  • Syl is improvising the shield, Kal manages to catch and throw Helaran's blade in vines.. the Fused whose arm Kal had cut charged him, arms regrown..
  • Amaram now can lash too.. they exchange words, Kal manages to see that Amaram still hurts.. after series of exchanges, he manages to hit Amaram's back with Sylhammer.. Amaram follows Kal with lashing, bad ploy... Kal strikes the crystal heart.. Amaram falls..climbs to his knees and the gemstone in his chest goes out.. 8 Fused come to attack Kal now
  • Glys helps Renarin finish off the thunderclast with stormlight.. Renarin still troubled that he's alive
  • Jasnah helps Shallan up the wall, unable to keep lecturing about soulcasting.. who was the girl though in previous POV of Shallan?
  • Renarin goes to Oathgate.. 12 Fused are waiting.. yet another young girl.. waves to Renarin.. gets info Teshav about attack in Urithiru..communicating with span reeds.. seems parshmen there aren't large enough to defeat Alethi there.. but still holding the oathgate.. Malata and Mr. T contingent out of reach..
  • Renarin goes anyway to fight the Fused to oathgate.. has a fit, kinda.. one which gives tells him future.. and smiles.. he knows what's coming.. Teft as a KR with Alethi troops.. since Teft has said his 3rd ideal, he carries a shardspear
  • Shallan is tired.. Jasnah/Navani/Fen and others discussing situation in Thaylen as well as Urithiru.. Shallan/Pattern see 1000s of fresh parshman troops carry ladders off ship to use in full-on assault
  • Renarin tells Lopen to not give chase to Fused.. Lopen goes to tell Teft.. Rock(who can now use stormlight and healed his wound) and Lyn land near Renarin..Rock gives a hug before flying off
  • Lift joins Dalinar, hands over the ruby.. it is dun so that Dalinar can put the red mist into it? yep, time for Thrill to rest.. Mr. T's words about capturing spren helping Dalinar
  • Kal doesn't have to beat the 8 Fused, simply have to last long enough.. have you read The Lies of Locke Lamora? ;)
  • Kal's stormlight runs out, is hurt but then the Fused run.. Dalinar has finished capturing the mist..all went dark, storm overhead growing still.. then sees something streaking from the city, brilliant white lights flying in the air
  • Amaram comes again..all broken up.. Kal goes all wordy and then Rocks slams two arrows into Amaram, killing him.. dark smoke escapes from him.. and two shardblades form beside him
  • Shallan is up on the walls, overwhelmed by faith on her by Thaylen that she could help against Amaram's soldiers and parshmen lining up to the walls.. then the red eyes fade, storm above fades too..
  • Kal heals with spheres brought by The Lopen.. Kal wonders how Rock had used the shardbow.. then sees Dalinar and Lift.. It's over

ideals

  • oh look, Moash is back.. I figure he helped the parshmen after the Fused had told him the truth about humans arriving from another world.. let's see what he's upto now
  • Moash wonders why there are 9 orders to Fused and not 10.. yup Moash knows that humans came from another world, which had ended
  • Moash is given a strange knife, sapphire set into pommel.. bright golden metal, almost white.. he killed Elhokar, asked if he would do the same to a god (Lightbringer anyone?)
  • Navani also uses "He's mine" dialogue.. embracing Dalinar.. he asks her to study the ruby, why it is able to prison an unmade.. Navani reminds that Gavilar did it too.. and Dalinar asks her to teach him read - yup, more clue that Dalinar wrote the Oathbringer book
  • Shallan pleads to Jasnah to fulfill her wardship until Jasnah determines Shallan is ready
  • and the confusion continues.. still, Adolin seemed to know her.. what was that? Shallan just about managed to push Veil and Radiant back instead of announcing union with Kal
  • Venli can easily blend in.. could change eyes to red if needed, courtesy Timbre capturing the voidspren..except when drawing in stormlight.. they are fleeing back to Marat
  • Venli can interpret what Timbre's rhythms.. when asking why not a human for bonding, gets to know many humans betrayed including Timbre's grandpa.. hmm.. so what about Eshonai?
  • Venli is only too happy to continue Odium's role for her.. but I think this time she's gonna tell truth as she knows it
  • Nightblood is praising Szeth but he needs more practice :P Szeth is meeting Nale who is not angry with Szeth..
  • Szeth swears to follow the will of Dalinar..he didn't mean it as words but is accepted by highspren..snow crystallizes around him in air..feels a surge of approval.. quest for next Ideal is cleansing Shin of false leaders, so long as Dalinar agrees
  • Nale asks him to follow Dalinar and not him.. he'd visit again to oversee training Surge of Division, dangerous.. but Szeth should have practiced before isn't it? :D ... Nightblood hums happily, saying he never liked Nale in the first place :D :D :D
  • Adolin has decided to step back, going to let him have Shallan.. uh oh.. what was that about not ruining in part-one??? and then Shallan goes all wordy listing Adolin's character and pulls him into breathtaking kiss.. tells him she'll try to stop Veil, who fawns over Kal, from leaking..
  • Kal has got a nice rock, accepts that Shallan has made her choice.. feels all she really was someone like Tien who made him feel better..
  • Syl says yup, humans brought void along with them to Roshar.. Odium was their god before turning to Honor, who draws in emotion and doesn't let it go.. so Honor made 10 orders based on 9 orders in Ashyn? one extra being bondsmith?
  • reports from Alethkar say that parshmen are pushing north, Alethi army having moved to Herdaz.. Kal thinks he can bring his parents to Urithiru now
  • Kal is getting to understand Recreance, but assures Syl past of bridge four would make them little more pragmatic than KRs responsible for Recreance
  • oh, Mr. T wants help eh? wants them to fly wounded from triage stations to oathgate
  • Kal tells Teft that becoming KR doesn't change what they are.. he'll help Teft as Teft helped Kal.. and they'll lift the bridge together..seeing Rock sitting with Shardbow in lap, thinking of oath broken.. despite having saved Kal
  • Dalinar stops on his way to rest by the temple of Taln.. (where are Taln and Ash??).. and wow, Mr. T tells to Dalinar he abandoned so as set himself to lead the coalition.. Dalinar realizes Mr. T must have politicked to become king of Jah Keved.. and Mr. T tells about a woman named Dova in Kharbranth..they think she is Battah the Herald..she said desolation was coming..and Mr. T tells about hiring Szeth.. so he's still trying to salvage Diagram??? or going to really support Dalinar?
  • Moash kills Jezrien with the knife.. dark smoke leaving a blackened wound, sapphire subdued glow.. final death.. so no returning to Damnation? it was the same beggar I think who'd given drink to Dalinar...
  • The Lopen is playing hide-and-seek with Rua, his honorspren? Teft and co are lashing large platform to transfer wounded to upper part of city..
  • The Lopen moves through wounded telling jokes and showing tricks.. he should sure meet Wit :P
  • he's speaking to a Thaylen all about being KR and what not.. even says first ideal 3rd one as journey before pancakes (I see you have met Lift :P).. and the second ideal too.. which gets accepted by stormfather suddenly :D says 'storm you' and gives rude gesture to stormfather, Rua joins :D :D :D :D :D :D
  • Lopen goes to see Kal about second ideal accepted, but Kal has received some msg and map with location listed from spanreed..
  • oh.. Ash is holding Taln, pulling him up.. his lucidity had faded..hid and whimpered during fighting.. she's thinking to going to Azir..
  • then something ripped inside of her, she swears by Adonalsium..Taln whimpered and collapsed..Ash stumbles, sinking to knees..a loss, a hole, a piece of her soul being excised.. guess Jezrien's death hits remaning Heralds in someway.. knows here father is dead..
  • Jasnah comes, carrying sketches of the two Heralds.. Ash wonders why Midius(Hoid?) been giving away pictures of Heralds..as the ripping sensation ends, Ash falls unconscious for first time in 1000s of years

a debt repaid

  • Kal is flying across ocean.. Dalinar had overcharged him with stormlight, despite exhausted.. Kal used that up to reach Kharbranth..where he stopped for night's sleep..then after long flight, reached Tarat sea..
  • now flew using gemstones from royal treasury in Kharbranth..watching coast for rock formation the scribe had given him..
  • Drehy and Skar..Shallan's 3 servants and some others..they have Elhokar with them.. Drehy says the second ideal..
  • Mr. T is unable to solve first page of day's puzzles..he's in Urithiru..8 days since battle..yup, he gave partial truths to Dalinar..
  • everstorm is back too.. oh, it was Diagram ppl after all who brought singers to Urithiru.. which means Malata helped..
  • looks like Mr. T can hear Odium now.. wants the window opened, with everstorm hitting..yup, Odium has come.. asks why he write to them..why allow armies to Urithiru.. Odium purposefully chose today to come when Mr. T wasn't brilliant
  • Odium brings up imitation of Diagram as was first written.. says it is truly incredible that Mr. T did it without access to Fortune or Spiritual Realm..and then shows how far He can see.. Mr. T gasps, seeing to eternity :D
  • Mr. T notes a particular ripple with Renarin in Odium's version..
  • Odium says Dalinar was not supposed to Ascend..Mr. T says Odium need him.. looks up and sees set of words, msg from himself in the past..reads it loud 'you have agreed to battle of champions..so must withdraw to prevent this contest from occurring, must not meet Dalinar again or he can force Odium to fight.. so Odium must let agents to do his work..and so Mr. T is needed' .. great..
  • Odium doesn't agree to protect ppl Mr. T will rule (as that would be all humans, him being king)..offers to save his family..nope says Mr. T and then asks for Kharbranth to be saved..agreement is reached - Odium would spare the city, any humans born into it, along with their spouses..
  • Odium then says he needs the Honorblade they stole and find out for him what Alethi have discovered about the tower..
  • what exactly is Odium's power here.. knows some stuff but not others.. why'd he need Mr. T at all?
  • Shallan-Adolin wedding date one week away..
  • Shallan and Dalinar doing their world map thingy.. Dalinar asks her to color code them according to alliances and coalitions.. then using stormfather's new images of Kholinar, that is brought out in detail..
  • Dalinar wants to put Adolin as king as Alethkar..Adolin finally admits to killing Sadeas.. uh oh.. okay Dalinar just wants to divest himself of Alethkar.. Adolin says he cant be king.. Shallan asks have they considered... (I am guessing Sebarial)
  • and I failed again to spot Sanderson's twist.. it is Jasnah :)
  • Moash is given Jezrien's honorblade..renamed Vyre, He Who Quiets..
  • day of Shallan's marriage.. too much to hope nothing goes wrong? :P
  • gifts.. fish from Lift, pair of boots from Kal :D
  • Ialai has left Urithiru in disgrace.. sure she will rise up again..
  • wondering what Pattern is going to say.. no mating?
  • Balat, Wikim and Jushu turn up.. Eylita has come too.. Mraize asks her to find the unmade who seems willing to break from Odium.. she has to persuade unmade to serve ghostbloods, or at least capture and deliver to them.. (wondering if Mraize is from Ashyn)
  • oh, Renarin bonded one of Sja-anat's spren..
  • Rial and other bridge 13 have joined Teft as squires.. Szeth only guard for Dalinar at the moment
  • Dalinar picks up a pen to start writing..3 weeks since he'd started..
  • most important words a man can say 'I will do better'.. and confirmation at last Dalinar wrote Oathbringer.. and hint that he can feel distant, unseen light - Adonalsium?

epilogue - great art

  • time for Wit, who is arriving this time? world hopper? another shard?
  • he's in a line, about 200 ppl there.. in Kholinar..
  • hmm, if Rayse(Odium) learned Wit was in the city, he'd level the city for even the slimmest chance of ending him.. wow Wit, you do have such high opinions for yourself..may be true too
  • Wit is upto something.. been using something to lose hair in patches.. healing repressed, so the tooth he managed to get pulled out(by cutting in front of Thaylen in the line) would stay a few days
  • does a bit of awakening to get a little girl to emerge from shadows into light..then takes her to parents who've lost their kid..
  • turns and starts up the steps towards the palace..adopting mad act.. passes sentry, who'd shared dance with Wit 1000s of years ago.. trained to watch for him but fails now..
  • Wit acts his way to patch of blood staining the ground (Elhokar's).. hmm, he's convinced a Pattern to go with him.. Life before death, little one.. this was the reason he'd come to Kholinar.. I'm sure it is the cryptic that Elhokar wanted to bond...
  • Wit already has lightweaving skills, what will this bond do I wonder.. :)

endnote

  • Ketek written by Jasnah for Shallan's wedding
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